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  • cannibal.

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    Alright, so you mentioned this being for Creative Writing, I'm going to assume this is a class. If it is then your teacher should be or should have been amazed. You have loads of talent more so than I've seen on the site so far, and I've been here since 2007. I've got to put it out there, your teacher, if this was a class, has some serious problems if they weren't in awe.

    I really like this, you put so much detail into and it allows you to capture how it really feels to suffer from depression or suicidal thoughts. I see the last comment and chapter was added way back when but I think you should continue writing it. I'd gladly subscribe if you did. Just let me know, this is definitely worth being proud of!
    January 25th, 2011 at 07:50am
  • exotictrash7

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    YES! You're writting again!
    So good, I really like the vulnerable Bill in stories, perfect capture of him.
    Can't wait for more~
    September 9th, 2009 at 01:38am
  • Aciddwolf

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    o.o
    It's good.
    More. More now. NOW.
    *growls, and holds up Gusti* do you want him? Do yooouu want him? Welll... more IHE and you get him!
    August 16th, 2009 at 07:48am
  • TheInevitable

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    I love this.
    Please continue with it, even though it makes me sad. =p
    March 23rd, 2009 at 03:36am
  • gnarly.

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    I absolutely love this story.
    Your writing style is exquisite.
    please update when you get the chance.
    February 14th, 2009 at 12:47am
  • BlackoutSpark

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    Aw poor Billa. I want him to cheeeer up! =D
    Love it dahling! XD

    Dance
    February 9th, 2009 at 09:04pm
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    not bad
    February 9th, 2009 at 04:52am
  • BlackoutSpark

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    Aw I loooved.
    Poor Bill! I just wanted to hugggg him! ^_^
    I'm glad he's happy again. =]

    Dance
    January 12th, 2009 at 10:55pm
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    was die fickt?!
    November 10th, 2008 at 12:56am
  • holysmokes

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    ah, really really good update =]

    more soon bitte?
    November 9th, 2008 at 02:16am
  • Purple_Music94

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    OH SNAP!!!!!!!!
    update please?????
    :D
    November 8th, 2008 at 07:45pm
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    I kinda like it
    October 29th, 2008 at 02:11am
  • holysmokes

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    loved it.
    more soon!
    October 26th, 2008 at 02:22am
  • holysmokes

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    woah.
    this is an amazing story. really really well written. i like the second person's pov. its different to me.
    i love this.
    more soon please =]
    October 19th, 2008 at 05:19am
  • isangelical.

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    ghanuaodhyhea78fguauia

    I love this a lot.
    You have a superb writing style and a lovely vocabulary. I love all the detail you put into it.
    And the second person POV, uncommon and used very well.
    And I love stories involving suicide and depression. Fetish of mine. You portray it deliciously.
    Keep it coming. XD
    October 15th, 2008 at 05:49am
  • wirsindtraeumer.

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    This is...
    too amazing.
    The writing, the details, everything.
    more soon?
    October 7th, 2008 at 06:19am
  • Be_Not_Seen

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    I love this story SO much!
    More soon, please?
    October 4th, 2008 at 08:15pm
  • junior

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    More.
    Now.

    bitte?
    October 4th, 2008 at 03:06pm
  • She's Lost Control

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    So far, so good.
    I like Bill stories with a little bit of a darker edge.
    I like your background colors, too. They really fit the tone.
    :)
    October 4th, 2008 at 05:04am
  • Aciddwolf

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    I likesh its!
    Hah. I finally reads it. Ja. So... you better get to writing!
    October 4th, 2008 at 02:35am
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