Slave For Eternity. - Comments

Update! please I'm begging! I came across this story and could not keep my eyes off it!
I've never read a story which fills with me with such emotion that I gash and my heart pounds in my chest! xx

wtf? u put it's about to heat up and then not update forever? not cool

I've definitely never found a twilight fan-fiction like this before.

And I have to say- I absolutely love it.

The way the talk, the way she thinks - everything.

This is amazing.

And one of the most captivating and well written stories I've ound on here in... well, ever.

I hope it's off hiatus soon.

I adore this. :)

Wow I haven't read this in a while, I had to go back a few chapters to remember what was happening :S
I still love it! Keep it up :)
Oh, and hope you enjoyed Green Day!! They're wonderful live.

please update!!! (:

<333333333!

OMFG!!!!!!!! ITS ABOUT TIME YOU UPDATED!!!! lol
Emmen is a dick face.......
i love this story, update faster this time!
lol
post soon

Emmen didn't beat up that little girl, did he? I hope not.
I hope you can update soon. I love this story so much.

you updated! finally!!!!
poor little girl. i really hate emmen
i want to show him how it feels.
you shoul;d make a side feed where people
beat him up haha.
where is edward?

Please update!!!

so sorry i didn't comment when i read
i was doing ten things at once.
i really liked.
who was it at th end?????

great update! damn the cliffhanger... >:/

NOOOO! You can't stop there! I loved the update.
Please update soon. I need to know who's at the door.

wooooot!! that was an awesome update!!!!! i cant wait for more:) keep up the good work!! i wonder whats going to happen next.

Are you going to update this soon? Please do!

I just started reading this, and I love it, but Im now sad because the last update was a month ago and I really want to know what happens.

I love this story! It's like no other fan-fic i've read before. Now I kind of hate fan-fics, just because I think people should be creative and write THEIR OWN STORIES, but I looooved it. It's not even a fan-fic to me. It's more like a story and one of the characters just happened to be Edward Cullen. What's going to happen next? o_O
Yay, i'm commenter number 191! I feel so special :)

I actually liked the update. Rather cynical. Really pessimistic. I loved it though. I hope you update very, very soon.

I love this story. Please write more!!

That chapter was brootal!
Please update soon.