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Just Delirious.
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I cried while reading that.
I especially loved the ending, with the list. The way that Pat reacted to all of it...you could tell he was head over heels for Erin.
May 9th, 2009 at 08:58pm
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i basically just cried my eyes out, kthanks.
that was fucking INCREDIBLE!
no lie.
(:
January 31st, 2009 at 06:29am
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i cried and cired and cried.
this was fucking amazing!!!
maybe possbily write more .... i know it's just a one-shot buuuuuuut :)
January 3rd, 2009 at 09:19pm
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i cried.
this was amazing.
the song Granny's Song by Jeremy Ashida goes well with it too
December 24th, 2008 at 08:45am
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Awh this was so touching.
September 28th, 2008 at 02:17pm
Glow Worm.
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This was soo good :]]
I love Pat Kirch so much <3
You have to write a happier one, kay? I don't like thinking of him sad =[
anywayy
Good job! :]
September 22nd, 2008 at 12:03am
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I especially loved the ending, with the list. The way that Pat reacted to all of it...you could tell he was head over heels for Erin.