One Breath - Comments

  • Just Delirious.

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    I cried while reading that.

    I especially loved the ending, with the list. The way that Pat reacted to all of it...you could tell he was head over heels for Erin.
    May 9th, 2009 at 08:58pm
  • candycanepirate

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    i basically just cried my eyes out, kthanks.
    that was fucking INCREDIBLE!
    no lie.

    (:
    January 31st, 2009 at 06:29am
  • hannahelizabeth

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    i cried and cired and cried.
    this was fucking amazing!!!
    maybe possbily write more .... i know it's just a one-shot buuuuuuut :)
    January 3rd, 2009 at 09:19pm
  • Brian Dales

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    i cried.
    this was amazing.

    the song Granny's Song by Jeremy Ashida goes well with it too
    December 24th, 2008 at 08:45am
  • TryingToFindTheWords

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    Awh this was so touching.
    September 28th, 2008 at 02:17pm
  • Glow Worm.

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    This was soo good :]]
    I love Pat Kirch so much <3

    You have to write a happier one, kay? I don't like thinking of him sad =[
    anywayy
    Good job! :]
    September 22nd, 2008 at 12:03am