One Breath - Comments

Just Delirious. (600)

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I cried while reading that.

I especially loved the ending, with the list. The way that Pat reacted to all of it...you could tell he was head over heels for Erin.

May 9th, 2009 at 08:58pm

candycanepirate (100)

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i basically just cried my eyes out, kthanks.
that was fucking INCREDIBLE!
no lie.

(:

January 31st, 2009 at 06:29am

hannahelizabeth (100)

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i cried and cired and cried.
this was fucking amazing!!!
maybe possbily write more .... i know it's just a one-shot buuuuuuut :)

January 3rd, 2009 at 09:19pm

Brian Dales (100)

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i cried.
this was amazing.

the song Granny's Song by Jeremy Ashida goes well with it too

December 24th, 2008 at 08:45am

TryingToFindTheWords (100)

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Awh this was so touching.

September 28th, 2008 at 02:17pm

Glow Worm. (100)

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This was soo good :]]
I love Pat Kirch so much <3

You have to write a happier one, kay? I don't like thinking of him sad =[
anywayy
Good job! :]

September 22nd, 2008 at 12:03am