The Diary of a Young Vampire Man - Comments

  • ExXxCruc!at!ng.pa!N

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    I love Ellen Hopkins and yea so i automatically liked this story alot. so i am subscribing please please PLEASE!!! keep updating. I like the first 3 chapters.
    February 16th, 2010 at 05:41pm
  • disenchantedXyouth

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    It takes a really skilled writer to say a lot in few words.
    I'm entirely impressed.
    =)
    October 13th, 2008 at 01:34am
  • Ardehp

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    this is awesome!

    I love it!

    KEEP GOING!!!!
    October 7th, 2008 at 02:43pm
  • Maxxie?

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    I likes it
    A+
    October 5th, 2008 at 07:01pm
  • HisBeautifulDisaster

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    good story. love it!!! update when you can please!!
    September 29th, 2008 at 02:52am
  • Llamas Pwn

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    i like it
    it kinda has that strong feeling to it , in the way that it's writen, that makes you feel for the characters
    =]
    September 24th, 2008 at 04:30am
  • Cupcake :3

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    Hm..
    more stories maybe?

    Are they all written like this?
    Its a nice style. (:
    September 23rd, 2008 at 06:56pm
  • juicy

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    I <333 this.
    September 23rd, 2008 at 05:14am
  • sillylittlegirl

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    Wow, it's good. Are you just writing it now, or have you already written it all? Well which ever one, hope you post more with in the week or something. lol Later. :D
    September 22nd, 2008 at 03:14pm
  • quaf

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    i really like it. its really simple but it has a meaning and
    you dont even have to write alot
    September 22nd, 2008 at 06:38am
  • AllieKillJoy

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    Can I rape your story?
    Lmao
    I love it
    Vampires rock!!!!
    *turns into vampire*
    *hiss*
    better runnnnn!
    September 22nd, 2008 at 04:47am
  • Mad.As.A.CHESSUR

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    I love it!! it's very good!! please keep writing!!
    September 22nd, 2008 at 04:07am
  • BloodShotEyes

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    nice, I like it. Good job!
    September 22nd, 2008 at 03:55am
  • hello; winter

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    yes, very lame title.
    But awesome story. ;D
    Yes, awesome indeed.
    One small suggestion, involving title, please don't take it personally.
    How about...Soulmate?
    Idk, the chapter where he's talking about wanting a soulmate made it pop into my head.
    September 22nd, 2008 at 03:42am
  • kurT.

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    Naiz. Verry good but maybe you should make the chapters a teensy bit longer ^^ x
    September 22nd, 2008 at 03:14am
  • radical

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    Rather good, but try writing longer chapters, other wise, people will never finish it.
    September 22nd, 2008 at 03:12am
  • istayup.late

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    I really like this.
    And I agree with what you said in your profile, Stephenie Meyer is just a tad to romantic.
    I'm so excited to be reading more of this story!
    September 22nd, 2008 at 02:41am
  • Momojomomo

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    O.O OM Frucking G i...i realleh realleh like it. ish short but...I LIKE IT! WOOT 10POINTS FER JOO ma'am
    September 22nd, 2008 at 02:00am
  • Dark Magical Dreams

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    its good Clap Clap *dance dance dance* Dance Dance
    September 22nd, 2008 at 01:58am