Someone out There Loves You After All - Comments

Wow.... That was amazing. His did I not find it until now?

oh my goodness that was a really good story
so is Jeph actually Gerard...? I'm so confused someone explain!!!!! lol

I just sat here and read this start to finish, I loved it :)

Fantastic story! I loved it!

i just found this story yesterday (i was looking for completed frerards..) and i really do like it.. im going to start reading the sequel now ^.^

I just read this straight through.
It was.. beautiful.

Wow.. I came by this storey a few hours ago, and just finished reading and I thought It was amazing. Flowed so easily and actually suprised me more times than I can count, unlike most other stories I read these days. Just wanted to say you did a great job (:

Ahhhhh!

Someone out there did love me after all.

Jeph.

THE END

I've JUST been notified about the update!! Dx
lameness!!
But WOW! That was some ending!!!
I'm glad you're doing a sequal xDDD

O_O

Normally, I hate Frerards. Not gonna lie. But this is one that I love.

I think it's really creative, and minus the grammar mistakes, really really good. xD

I'm glad I picked this one to read. :tehe: And I can't wait to read the sequel. X]I shall do the post in the pimping and reccing thread now. Recced. Sorry it took so long to read. Computers suck sometimes. -_-

OH! Which reminds me.

JEPH?!

I never knew this eneded T_T whaaaat. I was going through my subscriptions and this was INFUCKINGACTIVE. but i finished.. and feel like crying a bit :\ i dunno why. but gosh.. what a twisted ending , my dear. and i feel horrible for being so delayed in it.. I LOVE THIS STORY to bits. I do. i hate that i didn't get to read it before TT__TT

and there's a SEQUEL. gosh who couldn't you you for that <3

Christofer Drew:

Jeph? |: Say what now?!?!

That's exactly what i said !

JEPH ?! :| what ?

uhhhh..... you can't have sex w/ gerard and think of Jeph. That's just.... wrong.

wow. I can't believe this is over. wonder what the sequal will be like.... but no time to read now. lol. guess I'll have to check it out later. but I will 'stay with you,' ya know? lol. :)

this story was so.. scarily addicting, you know?

Like, the first time I started reading it, I couldn't get my eyes off the screen (which resulted into me getting in trouble for not being able to wake up the next morning due to sleepiness), but it was all worth it.

This story was one of my favorite Frerard's, I loved it so much! I love the gentle, intimate detail you put into it. I felt like i was standing there in the room with them watching (my life's dream xD).

The beginning of the story confused me a bit, but after reading, I was hooked, as I said. I thought the plot was amazing, your like.. my new favorite plot writer. Gerard's character scared me a little bit at first, seeing as though he was a stalker, and I thought he was seriously going to hurt Frankie or something in the beginning due to his anger. But I was amazed at how much he cared so much for Frankie. He was so scared of losing him..

Then when the time of ignoring came nearly blew me off the top. I couldn't believe that Gerard started to do that! And this time, I'm talking about the second time he left Frank. Although, as he said, 'left' wasn't the exactly the right word, but I think you get what I mean. It made me depressed to have to read about Frank going through it all hard because of Gerard. You could really tell how much Frank had started to care and love Gerard as compared to what he felt towards him more in the beginning.

But then when I read how Frankie tried to kill himself, I didn't know what to think. I know that some of your stories have some sort of.. thrill-tragedy type thing to it. I'm not really sure how to describe it.. like, you make the worst happen. An almost-unhappy ending. And so because of that, I was seriously afraid that you were going to make Frank die. That would've been uber depressing..

But then, da-da-da-DA! Everything changed, and although Frankie was a bit mad or another over Gerard, he was still so drawn to him.

Now moving on away from suicide.. Frank sleeping with Jeph. His best friend. His bisexual sweet of a best friend. I can only imagine how badly that hurt Gerard, especially how later on, Gerard told Frankie that he had known and heard. That must of been so heart-breaking for him. And then it turns around to breaking Jeph's heart at the fact that Frankie had even told him to make love with him before going off and telling Jeph that they couldn't be together. Ever.

It was so sad how Jeph was willing to wait, especially that we now know that Jeph will probably never be with Frank. It was like a slap in the face.

It was also unpredictable by here.. Frank had no idea that Gerard was going to call due to the fact that he hadn't called in months. But then, the one night he goes out and tries to forget about the pain Gerard caused him, he calls. And because Frank missed it, he cousin, also one of his best friends, gets murdered by Gerard in a way so planned out that it was meant to look like suicide. I didn't want to imagine the look of terror on Frank's face when he entered the building to a bloody, dead cousin. That was tragic! I couldn't believe that had happened! Well, I mean, in a way I understood, but still! In a way, I guess I can sort of see why Gerard would rather have killed Frank's cousin rather than the man he had slept with. Sort of.

But then.. BAM! Gerard comes back!! *screams* And they profess their love to the other. Its amazing how Frank's love is so powerful that he didn't even hardly care when he found out Gerard was the murderer. He was just so suffocated by hurt and pain and lonliness, and Gerard was like his breath of fresh air. He was willing to anything to get to that place of contentness again.

And oh the happiness when Gerard proposed! Sure, it was awkward a little bit by the way he asked in the moment, but it was so still sweetly amazing. No, awesomazing! That is such a beautiful way to meet: on their wedding day. Their first time to make love would be on their wedding night, the first time they kissed would be after that preacher-guy said 'you may kiss' after being bonded in matrimony, the first time they would caress each other for real in physical love would when they met on that day, the beautiful day of their simple wedding.

Then, just out of nowhere, you questioned it all! Frank was so happy and excited, but became nearly so terrified just because he had found out he was marrying a man he didn't know.. he didn't even know Gerard's last name! I was scared for the couple, I didn't want it to go down. I didn't want Frank to suddenly reject Gerard because he didn't know his name. Gerard's terrified reaction to what Frank had said made myself want to cry. I didn't want that to happen. They are too perfect together, too much of a beautiful couple, to let things end so badly that way. I couldn't believe it, I didn't want to. I didn't want it to end like that. But luckily, you picked it back up.

Then they got married. It was so sweet, so beautiful. All the exact detail, the exact emotion that was described. The pure bliss and mere perfection.. it was so beautiful. I felt so happy. And then when they left, the beautiful, gentle detail that described them while beginning the foreplay to what would be a beautiful art of love-making for the two. And even though neither of them were virgins, the way the described the care and the love, you could almost forget that simple detail, because they seemed in such bliss doing it together for the first time, and it was like the happiness they felt after such an amazing moment was like it was the first time for both of them to have done something so intimate with somebody.

All in all, I loved the story so much. It was amazing, exciting, depressing, beautiful, addicting.. I'm going to label your stories as a drug.. and I'm the new drug-y for them! I'll be tripping head over heals for them because after the amazing first story, your other ones our bound to be even better now that you've had an experience.

I'm going to check out the sequel now, thank's for writing such an incredible story!

xoxo-
Frankie

Jeph? |: Say what now?!?!

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im so fucking confused!
but in a good way...i think.
YAY i finished cant wait to read the sequel...
but didnt want it to finish.
xoxox

Omg!!! You are creating so much tension for your readers you do know that? That's gonna make so many people go crazy. I hope Jeph, Frank, and Gerard all have happy endings. I think that Bob is going to be either gay or bi and end up with Gerard or Jeph.

oh my word.
I absolutely loved it.
All the way through.
You did and amazing job with this.
Fuck, the end almost got me in tears ahaha
:}

I've finally gotten around to finishing this chapter.

It was so beautiful. So touching and lovely.

But at the end, Jeph? Nooo. This makes me nervous about the sequel, but I can't help my burning curiosity. Normally I don't read sequels, but I'm not going to be able to keep away.

I'm off to subscribe to it right now.

P.S. CONGRATULATIONS ON FINISHING YOUR FIRST STORY. [not like. well. you know what I mean.]

<3<3<3<3

xo

Bebe, I love you. And I miss talking to you. :( Great final chapter. :)

omg. chapter 25 was so fucking unfair!
i so wanted my girlfriend so much....fuck it was so good.
i love this story with all of my heart.