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  • priscillaelise

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    AAHHHH!
    VAMPIRE PORN!
    hahahahahhahahahahahahahhahhahahah.
    ooooohhhhh.
    that was funnny.
    haaaa.
    anyways,
    does this mean that ella can only
    stay half vampire?
    or did he seriously
    just drink her blood and not
    release any venom?
    i wanna knoooow.
    heehehehhehee,
    anyways.
    i almost peed my pants because
    there were 3 updates
    since the last time i have
    been on,
    an this is my favorite
    twilight/spin-off of twilight
    story.
    woooohhhhoooo.
    i am so effing PUMPED!
    and idk why...
    ???
    December 5th, 2008 at 03:17am
  • finallymoving.

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    Huh.. wonder how that happened?
    more soon!
    December 4th, 2008 at 03:22am
  • xeternalxdreamerx

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    Loved it!!
    December 3rd, 2008 at 10:34pm
  • Firefly267

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    Wooo!! love it!!!
    December 2nd, 2008 at 01:54am
  • finallymoving.

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    i really liked this chapter!
    November 30th, 2008 at 11:18pm
  • xeternalxdreamerx

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    I loved the update!
    November 30th, 2008 at 01:46pm
  • Freak Out

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    good movie.
    of course he looked constinpated,
    he was straining to not attack people
    alice and jacoub were the best actors,
    and i liked it,
    it sucked compared to the book,
    but it was an awesome movie on its own
    November 25th, 2008 at 07:21am
  • nutmeg-smithy-165

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    all my friends noticed that. i really liked the movie though.

    i hope you write some more.
    November 25th, 2008 at 03:10am
  • dxbaby424

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    I totally noticed him looking constipated too!!! Him and Edward, when they were trying to look intense looked like they were stuck on the potty trying to poop out a turtle XD
    November 25th, 2008 at 03:01am
  • finallymoving.

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    lmao (:
    you make Bella sound like such a prude, which she was, until the 4th book ahha
    more soon!
    November 24th, 2008 at 03:55am
  • TaraNicole

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    Your story is completely kick ass =]
    Please keep writing?
    November 22nd, 2008 at 05:58pm
  • priscillaelise

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    edward is her other half.
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    that was so cute.
    awwww.
    : DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
    big big BIG smiles.
    anyways.
    i liked the update.
    and i wanna know what the hell
    the important news is!
    jeeesh woman.
    come on!
    November 21st, 2008 at 05:29am
  • lovesicklullabies

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    great update =]]! i love this story more and more.
    November 21st, 2008 at 02:08am
  • xeternalxdreamerx

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    I am officially addicted to this story.
    Awesome update!
    November 20th, 2008 at 05:30pm
  • Firefly267

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    Yay!! love it!!!
    Can't wait for more!!!
    Need to update!!!
    November 20th, 2008 at 12:38am
  • finallymoving.

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    I really don't enjoy Twilight fanfics for some reason, but since this has all other bands and stuff it makes it better =]
    I really like this more soon!
    November 15th, 2008 at 11:18pm
  • xeternalxdreamerx

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    Oh I loved the update.
    Edward just keeps messing with her mind, even if he's not around.
    I'm glad Bella wasn't angry.
    Oh, Frank <3
    he's so cute
    Update soon...... x x x
    November 15th, 2008 at 09:40am
  • priscillaelise

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    shes in love with edward.
    and she FINALLY admitted it!
    jeeeesh.
    what a relief.
    oooohhh.
    more of frankie.
    : DDDDDD
    my favorite part were the concert scenes.
    i absolutely loooove them.
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    keep up the awesome writing skills.
    and ill keep up the reading.
    ;]]
    November 15th, 2008 at 03:34am
  • Ella Bella

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    I love this story! It's absolutly amazing!!! XD
    November 14th, 2008 at 04:20pm
  • Firefly267

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    Love it!!!
    Keep it up!!
    November 14th, 2008 at 05:29am
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