there will be high-intensity drama to come. i have to put in the rest of the exposition so the reader can fully understand frank's situation, and then the real story starts. this is just the beginning.
this is great! im so totally addicted to ur story...your writing makes me feel how frank feels, so disconnected, disorienated, and generally at an unease keep it up. Btw it would be great if you put in a high tensity drama part thingy-i hope u know what i am talking bout.