Just to Hold You Close and Tight - Comments

I just spent the past hour or two rereading this story.

Absolutely incredible.

I just spent the last two hours reading all of this story; it’s just… Wow!
I love the chemistry between Ray and Amber and how Ben came into play.

It was just breath taking the way you wrote it – just, amazing.
I loved this a lot, honest.

The ending made me tear up and smile

It took me so long to finish this, but I loved the rest of it, especially the ending!!

sequal????

aww that was awesome i loved it!!! but i'm kinda sad its over :( but it was amazing !!!!! =D

OH MY GOD THAT FUCKING OWNED MAN! I LOVERSEDEDEDED IT!!!!

OH MY GOD!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER!!!!!!!!!!! {sniffles} That was so sweet that it almost made me cry.... I LOVED IT SO MUCH!!!!! <.< >.> Sequal...? hehehe, even if not, it was still amazing.... keep writing, I shall keep reading it. :D

such a cute ending!!!

i loved it :)

it was a great story

*sob* ITS OVER!!!!!! AHHHHH *runs away crying*
u better be writing more stories....b/c i WILL be reading
LoLz
Cv

HOW. WHY.

WHYYYYYYY.

WHY MUST IT ENNNNNND.

GAHHH.

Very good though. You have inspired me. BE ON THE LOOKOUT FOR ANOTHER RAY TORO/OFC FANFIC. THERE ARE TOO FEW. And the one I was reading before on here, Sing Like A Girl!, I had to pick up again on LJ. Author got banned *OHNOES*. Here's the link though, you might enjoy it! Chapter One. It's got like, fifty chapters XD

*bounces up and down in chair* GAH!!* pulls out excaliber* UP DATE NOW!!!

sorry for not commenting :(

sometimes my email spazzes.

but this is great! and i'm kinda/sad happy that its the end, you know?

there's. only. one. chapter. LEFT????? WWWWWUUUUUTTTTTTT????????!!!!!!!!!!?????? im just shocked by that......THE LAST ONE BETTER B GOOD OR ELSE!!! GRRRRR

awwwww poor Ray-Ray!!!!

wats wrong with ray? why is hebeing all mysterious? IS HE CHEATING ON AMBER!? *faints*

OMG!!!!!!!!!! i love it so much! gabby kinda sounds like nat in some ways...*ponders...but then loses intrest* MORE UPDATES!

God, these last chapters are getting me teary!

oh man! its so hard for them!!!!!! i think amber shouldn't be so moody around her gf's

WOOOOO UPDATESSSSSSSSSSSS

AWW!