My Submission, Your Addiction - Comments

damn..only the second chapter and you girls have got 7 stars! rock on! that was hot and i DEFINITELY can't wait for more!

that was absolutely sexy ;]
everything about this story oozes sexy and lust. this is very well written and i can't wait to read more.

oh I like it already.
Keep them chapters coming.

This, this is going to be good.

Awesome.

That's all I've got to say.
Its awesome.

Bye-Bye :D

This'll be amazing I can tell!

I get so excited when either of you start a new story... imagine the dancing when I saw you'd started another one TOGETHER.

EEP

Anyway, great start! Can't wait for more -subscribes-

I think I'm going to die from overload of greatness. I mean, first, you have Lizzy, who is my love, and Court, my other love, writing a story together, which is just genius in the first place. And then, having it yummy like this? *falls over* Now, I'm gonna start reading. xD

I agree with the comment above me; Frank as a business man is just plain hot in itself, no getting around it. And the best thing of all is, I can actually imagine him being like that, aside from the tattoos and such. He'd look good in a suit. :)

Yay Lizzy for shouting out to New Orleans! Just thought I'd mention that I caught that. xD

What a wonderful way for us to meet Gerard; that description, although it seemed kind of familiar from other stories, was just spot on. However, you're doing really good with Frank's personality too, just like I knew you would; you're one of my favorite Frank writers, just because you always seem to get inside the character and write him brilliantly. This Frank is just like that; when he said about the kids in the zoo, I burst out laughing.

I hate wayward screaming children.

And I think I'm going to die from overload again. Court, if you don't get your update out within the next two weeks, I might cry.

This sounds like it's the start of a very interesting, unique and sexy story, so keep up the gorgeous work darlings!

ily both! <3

ohh this story sounds yummy so far! frank all business-like? uhhh hotness! *giggles* can't wait for more!

just found this and i love it so far. this is bound to be very interesting ;)

-subscribes-

I love it!
Sounds different!
More soon?

me loves this! keep it up!

Love it so far :D

x

Wow, this is amazing!
It's a great first chapter and I can't wait to read more! :D
And the two of you are so talented! Just thinking of a Cort/Lizzy story is making me salivate.. :yah

*subscribes*

I bet Frank would like to shake more than just Gerard's hand.

I like where you've got this starting to go. Good luck with writing the rest of it!

Brilliant start!
Sounds great so far.
More soon would be awesome :)
xox

Wow. .frankie is a flirty guy ha. .hitting two birds in the airport. .well i do like the start of this story, makes me want to read more. .Those meeting gaze are so mesmerizing . .hahaha more soon. .

Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. Amazing.

Thats what I thought.

Oh, I also thought that you should update immediatly =]

Ohhh I liked no wait!!!
LOVED that!! it was really
Amazing!!! This seems to be interesting!!
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Subcribes!!

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