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  • ForeverPlagued

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    damn..only the second chapter and you girls have got 7 stars! rock on! that was hot and i DEFINITELY can't wait for more!
    September 27th, 2008 at 04:00am
  • andiegube

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    that was absolutely sexy ;]
    everything about this story oozes sexy and lust. this is very well written and i can't wait to read more.
    September 27th, 2008 at 03:53am
  • shadowsXinXdarkness

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    oh I like it already.
    Keep them chapters coming.
    September 27th, 2008 at 02:40am
  • nope.

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    This, this is going to be good.
    September 27th, 2008 at 01:11am
  • herpy berpy.

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    Awesome.

    That's all I've got to say.
    Its awesome.

    Bye-Bye :D
    September 27th, 2008 at 12:31am
  • Pumpkin Spice Latte

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    This'll be amazing I can tell!
    September 26th, 2008 at 10:43pm
  • Angelus.

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    I get so excited when either of you start a new story... imagine the dancing when I saw you'd started another one TOGETHER.

    EEP

    Anyway, great start! Can't wait for more -subscribes-
    September 26th, 2008 at 10:28pm
  • fun ghoul fez.

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    I think I'm going to die from overload of greatness. I mean, first, you have Lizzy, who is my love, and Court, my other love, writing a story together, which is just genius in the first place. And then, having it yummy like this? *falls over* Now, I'm gonna start reading. xD

    I agree with the comment above me; Frank as a business man is just plain hot in itself, no getting around it. And the best thing of all is, I can actually imagine him being like that, aside from the tattoos and such. He'd look good in a suit. :)

    Yay Lizzy for shouting out to New Orleans! Just thought I'd mention that I caught that. xD

    What a wonderful way for us to meet Gerard; that description, although it seemed kind of familiar from other stories, was just spot on. However, you're doing really good with Frank's personality too, just like I knew you would; you're one of my favorite Frank writers, just because you always seem to get inside the character and write him brilliantly. This Frank is just like that; when he said about the kids in the zoo, I burst out laughing.

    I hate wayward screaming children.

    And I think I'm going to die from overload again. Court, if you don't get your update out within the next two weeks, I might cry.

    This sounds like it's the start of a very interesting, unique and sexy story, so keep up the gorgeous work darlings!

    ily both! <3
    September 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • ForeverPlagued

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    ohh this story sounds yummy so far! frank all business-like? uhhh hotness! *giggles* can't wait for more!
    September 26th, 2008 at 10:14pm
  • andiegube

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    just found this and i love it so far. this is bound to be very interesting ;)

    -subscribes-
    September 26th, 2008 at 09:53pm
  • le bonheur

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    I love it!
    Sounds different!
    More soon?
    September 26th, 2008 at 09:46pm
  • Veteran

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    me loves this! keep it up!
    September 26th, 2008 at 09:44pm
  • aliiicimo;

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    Love it so far :D

    x
    September 26th, 2008 at 08:54pm
  • Dorian Gray

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    Wow Wow, this is amazing!
    It's a great first chapter and I can't wait to read more! :D
    And the two of you are so talented! Just thinking of a Cort/Lizzy story is making me salivate.. :yah

    *subscribes*
    September 26th, 2008 at 06:25pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    I bet Frank would like to shake more than just Gerard's hand. Naughty

    I like where you've got this starting to go. Good luck with writing the rest of it!
    September 26th, 2008 at 05:59pm
  • Post-It

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    Brilliant start!
    Sounds great so far.
    More soon would be awesome :)
    xox
    September 26th, 2008 at 05:15pm
  • bombcel

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    Wow. .frankie is a flirty guy ha. .hitting two birds in the airport. .well i do like the start of this story, makes me want to read more. .Those meeting gaze are so mesmerizing . .hahaha more soon. .
    September 26th, 2008 at 06:40am
  • eeeee

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    Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. Amazing.

    Thats what I thought.

    Oh, I also thought that you should update immediatly =]
    September 26th, 2008 at 06:15am
  • Catastrophic Corie;;

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    Ohhh I liked no wait!!!
    LOVED that!! it was really
    Amazing!!! This seems to be interesting!!
    MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

    Subcribes!!

    [[PAGE CLAIM!]]

    THERE YOU GO LOVE!
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    September 26th, 2008 at 05:50am