One Fumbled Touch - Comments

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Well the bit in italics is what happened when he first got into prison, I just wanted to show the events what happened before he got released sorry if its a bit confusing (:

I'm a bit confused. Is the bit in italics a dream?
Liked the chapter; at least Bill's not going to be in prison anymore.

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Oh, no.
Please let them save her... :/

Oh, dear.
But what about Williammmmm?
Update soon? I can't take the tension.

No, no, no!!
I hope she'll do the right thing, and tell the police that Mike made her say it.
After all Brendon and William have been through, there's still more drama!
I kind of love it, actually. xD
I still want them to have a happy ending, though.
Hint.

GAH YOU ALWAYS DO THIS TO ME!! Just when things seem to get better, you make something else equally terrible happen. Please god please dont let that little girl do what he says. She has to do the right thing, or I think I might die a little. PLLEEAASSEEEE work this out pretty please with a cherry and sugar and all kinds of other tastey condiments ontop? =)

Update soon! You guys kill me with anxiousness hahaha.

That chapter was friggen awesome, Mike sure is scary =S
Sian you rule!

And 9 stars....wth?

Okay, I just thought that Mike was angry about William sleeping with her (which would be understandable), but he seems actually kind of terrifying right now.
I feel sorry for Jessica, because there doesn't seem to be a way out if this for her...=(
Looking foward to more! xD

Ohmygosh. It's Ryyyan. =/
At least Brendon knows it was an accident now. x)
More?

Great chapter as always. I dont know how I'm handling all this angst lol but im addicted to this story. All I can say is I'm still hoping to god everything works out. William being the main characture that all this is happening to/he's doing is so unlike him or how I think he'd be thats probably why I'm so interested and of course because its well written. Update soon.

The poor cat!
Oh, no!
But, at least Spencer's okay. xD
Looking forward to more.

Thank god he's okay.
More soon?

So I couldnt resist and read the new chapter. It was good regardless and I'm glad Brendons not dead. I can only really really hope somehow everything gets worked out but im not even gonna get my hopes up because usually things get okay and then follow by getting worse. All I can do is hope pllleeaaseee pretty please with a cherry on top make eveything okay? Great as always, very well written. Update soon you know I'll read it despite what I say hahah. xo

How can I not be evil when your evil to us lol. This is to much, I'm not an angsty person I cant continue reading this train wreck of a life all of them (especially William) are all living. Well written as always but to sad and to much for me. Sorry... i'm a lame ass happy ending kind of person.

Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease
pleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease
pleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease
pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease don't kill Brendon.
Please?
-gasp- It's Mike!! Surely beating William to a pulp can wait for a little while, though? At least until they bring Brendon back to life again?
I'm going to keep telling myself that he's alive.
Update soon!

You kill me. At least its bitter sweet and not just bitter lol. I really really REALLY hope Brendon doesnt also die. COME ON YOU TRASHED WILLIAM AND ALREADY KILLED A MEMBER OF PATD BRENDON DOESNT NEED TO DIE hahaha. I'm happy you updated. Williams kinda crazy but its cute that there both happy in such crazy pretenses. Update soon and I really hope everythings okay and they get to live happily ever after haha I'm cheesy like that.

Don't die, Brendon!!

Oh, and, by the way, I'm not hatin' on your story. x) I'm sorry if it came across that way in my last comment. It's just stories tend to make me very emotional - I think it's my overactive imagination. =/

No, because I love this story, I really do. It's very well-written, and I always look forward to updates so I can find out what happens next! x)

Lmao...alot of negative comments...
Let's just say this...I can't promise anything!