Sleep - Comments

That was really beautiful. It makes me wanna cry.
Frank's since three years in coma...and Gerard's visiting him every day. That's lovely. I don't get Frank's mother, though.
I believe Frank responded Gerard. Sure he did. Otherwise it would be really mean of you. :(
Your writing style is amazing, very detailed.
More, please. :mrgreen:

Wow. . That Kinda sleep is sad. .frankie in the coma. .And gee waiting patiently for him to wake up. .Oh my! your words are beautiful and you written this very well. as if i was watching it. I like how you describe the feeling of longing and yeah of nothingness too. .Hope frankie will wake up before it's too late. .I will never lose hope. .I think he really did response. more soon. .