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  • Puddin?

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    Yay. I luffers it! She could like not date him and be all like noo I want Brian!!! Update soon please = D
    June 29th, 2009 at 03:11pm
  • love of vengeance

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    loved the update! more soon?
    May 8th, 2009 at 02:24pm
  • ShaleseRayEen

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    I'm really no help on this answer, sorry hun. Whatever works for the plot of the story will be just fine.:)
    If you want ideas, that might happen, from a reader then a lot of things could happen.
    - she could not date him
    - she could date him
    - she could not date him and date brain and something goes wrong then she dates James.
    - she could date him then something goes wrong and then dates Brain.
    Drama, twists, turn, whatever you like.
    love the story.:D
    April 30th, 2009 at 08:25am
  • Synester_Shorti

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    I love this story I just started reading and it is so good. On the issue of whether or not she should date James, I don't think she should. Why did you have to leave a cliffhanger there, although I can already guess who it is that helped her. Please update soon.
    April 25th, 2009 at 11:00pm
  • mcrgcvampress

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    to be honest its your story. its hard to say what should happen because i don't know what the end outcome is going to be... sorry im no help
    April 25th, 2009 at 03:30am
  • Synester_Shorti

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    Aww come on don't leave me hanging like that. Who is it on the phone? Please update. Love the story. PLease update.
    April 13th, 2009 at 09:45pm
  • ShaleseRayEen

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    YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    We missed you!!!!!!!!!!!! lol
    I hate that hoe!!!!!!!
    Who is it? Who is it? I want to know. Gah. lol
    Can't wait for the next one love.:)
    March 16th, 2009 at 03:05pm
  • RomanianLover

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    I really liked it :)
    <3
    December 7th, 2008 at 08:33am
  • ShaleseRayEen

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    next chapter please, lol
    Such a good story!! :)
    November 11th, 2008 at 11:17pm
  • finallymoving.

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    more soon please =]
    October 22nd, 2008 at 05:25am
  • Syn's So Hot

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    my bad I usually spell things how I say them an it sounds like two s' but if what was dessert state prison it sure would be yummy.............
    October 21st, 2008 at 11:45pm
  • quinn allman's hair.

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    High Dessert State Prison
    :lmfao
    i'm not sure id it's supposed to be dessert, or desert, but it made me laugh anyway lol
    i really love this, your writing kicks megatron ass :con:
    more soon?
    October 17th, 2008 at 02:18am
  • finallymoving.

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    I like your opinion on this a lot :]
    more soon!
    October 16th, 2008 at 05:06am
  • Kevin Jonas

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    Ronnie's adorable (:
    I love this!
    October 15th, 2008 at 06:45am
  • ShaleseRayEen

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    I'm commenting. I'm commenting.
    Loved it by the way!:) and thanks again. :lol:
    amazing Clap
    October 15th, 2008 at 05:52am
  • scream queen.

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    ALKJDFOIIER!

    Now I have to wait until Thursday/Friday!

    :crazy:

    I loved the update though! Bad Ronnie! Jail will do him good!
    October 15th, 2008 at 05:46am
  • scream queen.

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    OMFG!

    RONNIE RADKE!!!!!!!

    There best be an update soon?!

    Naughty
    October 10th, 2008 at 05:24pm
  • tlwx

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    RONNIE RADKE!!
    omg. update soon (102320)
    October 8th, 2008 at 05:10am
  • finallymoving.

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    love that song <3
    and ahh who is it?!
    October 8th, 2008 at 04:02am
  • catastrophe.

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    I love the story.
    October 8th, 2008 at 01:20am
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