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October 8th, 2008 at 01:27am
The Commencement Of My Death - Comments
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I like the story so far. Next chapter please! =DOctober 4th, 2008 at 09:48pm
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i like it!!!
but you switched povs at the end from first person to third....
other than that, YAY!!!October 1st, 2008 at 11:09pm -
i liked it!!
i thought it was funny when you used big words that didn't always fit the situation or context
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thats how much of a loser i am
*subscribes*September 29th, 2008 at 11:07pm -
:file:September 29th, 2008 at 05:23am
