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  • SayMoosyFate

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    October 8th, 2008 at 01:27am
  • thePHunkmaster

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    I like the story so far. Next chapter please! =D
    October 4th, 2008 at 09:48pm
  • SayMoosyFate

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    i like it!!!
    but you switched povs at the end from first person to third....
    other than that, YAY!!!
    October 1st, 2008 at 11:09pm
  • SayMoosyFate

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    i liked it!!
    i thought it was funny when you used big words that didn't always fit the situation or context
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    thats how much of a loser i am
    *subscribes*
    September 29th, 2008 at 11:07pm
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    September 29th, 2008 at 05:23am
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