Afraid Of The Light - Comments

Your story is awesome babe :) love it! Do me a Favour and keep writing :3 xx

Wow! I never knew it would turn out like that...I mean...James isn't evil..
wel, he is...an evil player...
AND I LOVE THE UPDATE...
i was sooo shocked to hear that James wasn't a stalker and a vampire thing!
I LOVED IT...
i was also surprised to hear Jack was in the same class as her, I thought he was like 26 or something...and
woooww....
Its sooo clear now..
I loved IT!! SOO MUCH!! THANKS SOO MUCHH!!
I don't want to say this, because its going to presurise you...
wait...I'll just say it..
ok....I WANT AN UPDATE!! SOO BADLY!!
I wan't to know what sally's going to do, and what she'll say...
and...OMG! stupid mini skirt girl!!
I was NOT expecting this!
awesome chapter!! YOu gotta keep it up!
You're the best writer ever hunny!
Binti...You need this published! Love it!!
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$@11y R0cKs!!
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Wow! Loved it so much! Thanks for updating...It was awesome!
so...now i know wat hapnd...It was her dad that killd her mom!! OWW!
you know her dream...I thought it was real...and then Jack woke her up from her dreaded nightmare! haha! Love it!
and like...James Is the evil one! HOW DARE YOU!
hahaaha! *breaks into exhilarated Laughing disorder instant weird bizzare moments*
haha! Do you remember that! haha!
and like....YOU GTA UPDATE...NOOWW!
hahaha! It was awesome!
seeriuosly AWESOME!
and...Keep writing...
and lke.............................LOVE IT! haha
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Omgggggg, the Story is Amazing!
Wow, ii Love it To Bitsz !!!!
Want Another UPDATE!
Sorry, but dis story, ROCKS 2 DA MAX
Coool =]
X [Mwah], Love Yah <3 ত (×.×)
Ł ♥ V ξ × Y ợ U × S ợ × M u ¢ h ¡ ! =×

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Woww!! Awesome I love the Update!!
LOVE IT LOVE IT! LOVE IT!
i have to go now...
cant coment properly...
But i have to say...
awesome..haha!
69 MESSAGES!!
and 21563 missed calls (soryy didnt pay attention to the number)
and..
YAY!
I WANT ANOTHER UPDATE :)
and...Jack...Did her rape her..
or was it sum1 else..
confusin...
You g2 tell me
Bye
Luv ya
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OMG!!!!
:-o WOW... Keep doing your Thing Girrrl!

Why Did you make her Leave?
Nooooo!! All She could've done
was chat to her friend's parents!!

[Lool, i'm sooo crazy, i'm making it as a real thing man :roll:
- (to me) >> ChiLL itsz juss a made-up AMAZIN STORY ]
But Stilll....It brings tension to the reader!

iiGot to Subscribe this,
&+ Have to Wait for Da Other Chapters!!

Damnnnnn, dis Story iz Amazing, iiWonder:
Where u gonna Make Her Live??
How is She Going to live with, care for her baby,
she knows nothing of...coz shesz only 14 :shock:

THIS STORY IS AMAZING!
=]
WOW, UR SUCH A GOOD "STORY MAKER"...HAHA
MASHA'ALLAHH!
KEEP IT REAL GURL!
iiLy SOoO Much...7abibtii
Byeee <33333

wow! Amasiing!
i just finished! and I'm loving it!
she left..again...
and hmph...
I knew this was going to turn into a self-harm story
;)
u c..im very cleva!!
yh wikid!
loved it!
I WANT UPDATES!
noooww!
NOWNOWNOW!
i mean...i tried clicking this invisible button wich said 'chapter 8'
But it did'nt wrk!!
Oh wel, i JUST HOPE WEN I TRY 2MORO it wud b ther
tc
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and oh yh...
spellin mistake...
no..i ment grammar
....and she entered to the doctor’s room.
i think u added the to by purpose
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tc
i wna read the nxt chapter
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OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!
u gave her AIDS!
i ment u mde her hav aids!
omgomgomgomg
meano maryam
WOW! ITS AWEOSME!
luvvin it
soo much!!
i need to read the nxt chapter
its like a drug!
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AWWWWWWWWW~~~!!
thats the sweetest thing eva!!
u mde her live with her best freind (i knew maryam's wer kool)
yh...
i agree
that killer is gne run after her!!
i need to go and read the nxt chapter!

wow! awesome!
luvin chapter 3..
WATT!! SHE GOT RAPED!
i wasnt expectin this from a maryam
:P
lol...i cud do worse...wait...theres nothin worser than rape rite
OMMMG.G..
that stupid drunken man took away her dignity
I WILL KILL HIM
watt! u didnt mention the pubs name!
lool
haA!
im realli enjoyin this
c u in the nxt chapter thing
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I dno if u no me..
But I'm the sort of person that likes to comment after every chapter!
lol
AND I'M LOVIN THIS ONE!!
watt...u mde her run away!!
how cud u...
u didnt evn say wat she took wiv her
(wich means she took nothin)
hah!
tc
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lookin 4ward to read chapter 3 (in 3 seconds)
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WOW! i just read Chapter 1..
and lol...
I LOVED IT!!
revenge huh...r u relatin 2 sum 1 (i.e. rana)
lol
onli jokin
U mde a spellin mistake btw...
u put 'police care' instead of 'police car'
lol...im extra
but i wnt my friends friends story perrfect!
lol
tc
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i need to read the nxt chapters
and suscribe!

AIDS!!! ahhhh....WRITE MORE!!!!! lol

this is good! keep updating sakura!

0.o
Aids?!?!
THE BABY HAS AIDS??
SHE HAS AIDS???
SHE hAS A BABY??
Poor Sally x[ Omg who called herrr??
Loving the update =] xx

yeah, your welcome :)

i like it, but the chapters are too short. keep going, and if you can, try to make the chaapters longer...just some ideas, you could have her meet a lycan or a neko...