Trying To Break Dawn - Comments

  • Love Me.

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    loved your story it was really good =)))
    March 15th, 2010 at 09:43pm
  • Tambry

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    wow this is really good!! why did gaara be somean to her for most of the story??? u would think that she would be mean to gaara not the other way around!!! write more storys please!!!! Clap Dance :D :) :o :P ;) :mrgreen:
    June 21st, 2009 at 08:49am
  • Bombs of Grace

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    I liked this story alot! At first I thought it was like a cross between 'Naruto' and 'Breaking Dawn' but it was actually a one-shot of my fav. Naruto character. Go figure! Good job!
    October 2nd, 2008 at 12:40am
  • Bomb-Fo-Shizzling!

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    woo! I stole this one-shot's comment virginity! lol (just like Gaara did to Dawn that night)Loved it babe!

    I think I'm going to add more to the 'short' story!


    read my Joker stories please & thank you!
    - to the other future commenters.
    October 2nd, 2008 at 12:33am