Fortuitous - Comments

Wow :( You're a great author. Such a sad story v.v

I'm happy her brother decided to step in :)

WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME T_T my heart oh god

That's okay, I wasn't really using that heart.

I love thw way you write this, it's so emotional and heartbreaking

The way you write is so poetic. I love it. ^_^ <3

such a extremely touching story filled with raw emotion, really enjoying it up to now.
God Bless.
<3

Once again, I adore you.

Mkay, I have literally just gotten out of the shower. I opened my laptop to check emails... and dropped everything. I'm like, standing in front of my desk in my dressing gown cause I didn't even bother sitting down. xD Look what you've done to me!

But seriously, that just about made me cry. How do you write so damn good, chica?

Happy New Year!

Aw yay. First update in a year xD

I love the way you write. Can't wait for more!

Brian? As in Brian Strange (or am I mixing names up here?)? That's fictional, isn't it? That doesn't fit in with the rest of the story, right? Wasn't he your best friend?

I'll stop asking questions now.

Man, I don't know what to think reading this. It's brilliant writing. But that Brian chap... one minute I love him, next minute I hate him.

*hugs* wonderful update, more soon please?

Keep on keeping on!

Oh, and RIP Jacko. :'(

Oh Jesus.

What a dominating prick.

I can see why she doesn't tell her parents though.

God, what a dilemma.

More soon, please?

wow, do you know the power you have in your words? I love it. You have a lot of potential, hell, your already good. The story is captivating, well written, i love how you show, not tell the emotions. Please keep the updates coming and know that people are always here for you

Oh god. Mommy knows.

That is not good.

Or maybe it is?

Well yes it is.

But then in a way it kinda isn't...

OH GOD I WANT TO HEAR MORE!

Oh shit. Showers are not good.

Gah this story is so good and so bad and I love it and I hate it and I don't want to hear any more and please don't stop.

XD

*Sniff* you gon' make me cry now.

I hate that this stuff happens.

*Glompage*

"She thought pain was love."
Just a quote from the play our senior class did last term.

Wow, that chapter is brilliant. You write really well.

This story was darkly captivating. And well written. Plus the fact that this is based on true events makes it that much more twistedly fascinating.

And yes, I'm weirdly captivated by all things macabre. But I'll definitely be following this story. Keep up the good work.

Oh my god...

O_O

Hmm. I really like this, Blue.
If you don't mind me asking, what 'true events' are this story based off of??