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  • insanetrain

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    Wow :( You're a great author. Such a sad story v.v
    August 27th, 2012 at 07:33pm
  • fearless-forever

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    I'm happy her brother decided to step in :)
    August 15th, 2012 at 09:29am
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME T_T my heart oh god
    August 14th, 2012 at 10:40am
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    That's okay, I wasn't really using that heart.
    August 13th, 2012 at 01:32pm
  • fearless-forever

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    I love thw way you write this, it's so emotional and heartbreaking
    August 9th, 2012 at 10:29pm
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    The way you write is so poetic. I love it. ^_^ <3
    July 14th, 2012 at 11:10am
  • onedirectionforever

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    such a extremely touching story filled with raw emotion, really enjoying it up to now.
    God Bless.
    <3
    July 8th, 2012 at 10:42pm
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    Once again, I adore you.
    October 3rd, 2011 at 11:38am
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    Mkay, I have literally just gotten out of the shower. I opened my laptop to check emails... and dropped everything. I'm like, standing in front of my desk in my dressing gown cause I didn't even bother sitting down. xD Look what you've done to me!

    But seriously, that just about made me cry. How do you write so damn good, chica?

    Happy New Year!
    January 2nd, 2011 at 11:03am
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    Aw yay. First update in a year xD

    I love the way you write. Can't wait for more!
    April 25th, 2010 at 11:22am
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    Brian? As in Brian Strange (or am I mixing names up here?)? That's fictional, isn't it? That doesn't fit in with the rest of the story, right? Wasn't he your best friend?

    I'll stop asking questions now.

    Man, I don't know what to think reading this. It's brilliant writing. But that Brian chap... one minute I love him, next minute I hate him.

    *hugs* wonderful update, more soon please?

    Keep on keeping on!

    Oh, and RIP Jacko. :'(
    June 26th, 2009 at 07:08am
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    Oh Jesus.

    What a dominating prick.

    I can see why she doesn't tell her parents though.

    God, what a dilemma.

    More soon, please?
    March 1st, 2009 at 03:07am
  • teenieella

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    wow, do you know the power you have in your words? I love it. You have a lot of potential, hell, your already good. The story is captivating, well written, i love how you show, not tell the emotions. Please keep the updates coming and know that people are always here for you
    February 28th, 2009 at 04:41am
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    Oh god. Mommy knows.

    That is not good.

    Or maybe it is?

    Well yes it is.

    But then in a way it kinda isn't...

    OH GOD I WANT TO HEAR MORE!
    January 6th, 2009 at 07:44am
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    Oh shit. Showers are not good.

    Gah this story is so good and so bad and I love it and I hate it and I don't want to hear any more and please don't stop.

    XD
    January 5th, 2009 at 09:14am
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    *Sniff* you gon' make me cry now.

    I hate that this stuff happens.

    *Glompage*
    January 4th, 2009 at 07:44am
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    "She thought pain was love."
    Just a quote from the play our senior class did last term.

    Wow, that chapter is brilliant. You write really well.
    November 24th, 2008 at 08:24am
  • MachineInTheGhost

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    This story was darkly captivating. And well written. Plus the fact that this is based on true events makes it that much more twistedly fascinating.

    And yes, I'm weirdly captivated by all things macabre. But I'll definitely be following this story. Keep up the good work.
    November 22nd, 2008 at 05:38am
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    Oh my god...

    O_O
    November 18th, 2008 at 08:25am
  • falling not flying

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    Hmm. I really like this, Blue.
    If you don't mind me asking, what 'true events' are this story based off of??
    November 10th, 2008 at 06:27am
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