Your Hand in Mine - Comments

Oh i pray to god he gets there before it gets to bad. I mean i feel for her and i don't want her to suffer like that.
Plus it would kill Gabe, he'd have the guilt forever.

More please?

DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN.

Uh oh!
You now have me on the edge of my seat, woman! Update soon! :]

aw man! i love this story so much!!
more soon!

You're gonna drive me crazy, I need to know what happens.
Update real soon, okay :cute:

i have no clue whats going on... gah! haha. an update soon-ish would be wonderful. :)

Nooo......
Gabe NEEDS to save her BEFORE anything happens she got raped before and if it happens again she'll be all depressed and tramatized and gabe is like her saviour and if gabe doesnt save her then have someone else save her like will or something.....

GABE!! RESCUE HER!

I think Gabe should have followed them when they left the party....and he comes and saves her BEFORE the rape.

And then they looooveee! =]

My thoughts.

=] More soon.

oh my god thats horrible, but shes dumb for going with him, I mean come on his brother rapes her and shes still hanging around him, shes stupid.

I think Gabe should save her like last second, so she gets what she deserves, but if Gabe doesn't save her she would probably never forgive him.

well since everyone's expecting gabe to save her, and that that's happen once before... you should something different... like she instantly develloped century old kung fu moves and starts beating his ass up!

i really hopes he saves her. it would be pretty shitty if she gets raped again.
but i could see it going either way.
haha. but keep writing.
cause i wanna keep reading.

if you don't make a sequel for this one then you should make sure to write another gabe story.

Gabe should definitely save her... But when is up to you. I think that either way, hopefully, she'll learn to listen to him next time!
Because if Gabe doesn't save her, I think he would feel horrible when he finds out.

xRestless.Reckless.x:

Hmmm....that was an interesting chapter...I liked it.

Do you really wanna know how I think the story should end? I think that he should've raped her...but fast forward that bit...I don't wanna read the gory details. And THEN Gabe should come save her. Yeah, she'll be broken, of course, and Gabe'll hate himself for not protecting her. But it'll show that you can still be happy in the worst of times.

Yeah, awesome chapter! And I'll be looking forward to your next one. =]

xRestless.Reckless.x

noooooooooo you cant let nick rape her shell be traumatized her intire life she dosent deserve it gabe has to save her ! dont make me hate you

noooooooooo you cant let nick rape her shell be traumatized her intire life she dosent deserve it gabe has to save her ! dont make me hate you

Hmmm....that was an interesting chapter...I liked it.

Do you really wanna know how I think the story should end? I think that he should've raped her...but fast forward that bit...I don't wanna read the gory details. And THEN Gabe should come save her. Yeah, she'll be broken, of course, and Gabe'll hate himself for not protecting her. But it'll show that you can still be happy in the worst of times.

Yeah, awesome chapter! And I'll be looking forward to your next one. =]

xRestless.Reckless.x

I think he should def. save her, otherwise it may get a bit cliche.
but, obviously, it's up to you, and the storys amazing so far so I doubt it'll turn out bad XD

Gabe needs to save her right now. Before anything more happens. Nobody ever deserves to suffer like that.

Well... I reckon if she gets raped again, she'll be all traumatised. Soooo, I reckon Gabe should save her ):
Poor girl ):
Update soooooooon.
x

He definitely has to save her!She suffered enough...

No!! Gabe has to save her! Stupid Nick -shakes fist-

Please update soon, I need to know what happens! :s