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  • underdog93

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    hmm? i kinda don't want him to save her...but then again i do...either way i'll be happy XD
    more soon please
    November 22nd, 2008 at 11:51am
  • eeeee

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    Oh no...

    He isnt going to rape her is he?

    I think Gabe and her will live happily ever after if he would stop being a know it all and if she would just give in to what she is feeling.

    Anyway, however you choose to end it I'm sure it'll be awesome.
    November 22nd, 2008 at 07:28am
  • frayed ends

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    Make a sequel :cute:
    This story is my favorite (:
    November 22nd, 2008 at 04:50am
  • Half-Blood

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    nick should go play in traffic:]

    and you should really make a sequel.
    November 21st, 2008 at 10:54pm
  • SheepCat

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    Grr, amazing update, but if Nick is REALLY bad, could you maybe make him....die?

    OH, and yes, you should make a sequel. =]
    November 21st, 2008 at 09:27pm
  • the.ugly.organ

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    woah!
    so amazing!
    i cant wait to see whats going to happen...
    and i think you should continue this for as long as possible, then do a sequal...
    because im slightly addicted:p
    November 21st, 2008 at 09:25pm
  • underdog93

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    AWESOME!!!! more soon please ;]
    November 21st, 2008 at 05:51pm
  • xxsykee

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    SILLY GRACIE!
    Stay with Gabe and William!
    Nick is be gon rape you... or something!
    D:
    November 21st, 2008 at 06:31am
  • chuck basstard.

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    NO! Something bad is SO gonna happen! But on the upside Gabe will come to the rescue and all will be well ^.^

    Great update!!! SEQUEL.:]
    November 21st, 2008 at 04:58am
  • Harley.Quinn

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    YAY! you uses my minty toothpaste line!

    and SEQUEL! I LOVE THIS STORY I NEVER WANT IT TO END!
    November 21st, 2008 at 03:33am
  • Arie Vixen

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    Yes a sequle!
    and is she stupid?
    November 21st, 2008 at 03:01am
  • Arie Vixen

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    Yes make a sequle!
    and is she stupid? I mean honestly listen to William atleast since she knows he wouldn't be speaking out of jeliousy!
    November 21st, 2008 at 03:00am
  • laughingatu1312

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    i think nick is going to take gracie to his brother. that would be super creepy
    i hope it ends with gabe and gracie together
    they better end up together i love them haha
    and a sequel would be lovely,
    haha i loveee this storryyyyy and i cant wait for more updates
    November 21st, 2008 at 02:45am
  • rawrz0rz

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    i agree with the person above me. Gabe should rescue her... And I really want them to end up together. sometime.
    But yes! A sequel would be amaaazing. I love this story.
    November 21st, 2008 at 02:33am
  • AtypicalHeart

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    I love this story! I'm scared of Nick though and I think Gabe should come to the rescue! Bah! I can't wait!
    Keep up the great work! :)
    November 21st, 2008 at 02:17am
  • xxmydeadlyromancexx

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    I think that she'll sooner or later get together with gabe and there should be a sequel!!!
    November 20th, 2008 at 09:39am
  • the.ugly.organ

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    great chapter, it's been awhile...;p
    i love how gabes jealousy and her blindsightedness are getting into the way of their relationship
    update?
    November 20th, 2008 at 04:02am
  • chuck basstard.

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! BAD BAD BAD GRACIE! You're not allowed to see bad things in Gabe! YOU HAVE TO GET WITH HIMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!

    I'm done yelling at a fictional character xD That was a great update! A sequel would be epic! More soon! :D
    November 19th, 2008 at 04:02am
  • underdog93

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    ooooo! MORE!! ;P
    November 19th, 2008 at 01:32am
  • Half-Blood

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    i love this story. it's sooo good.
    i really hope you do write a sequel, btw.
    (: update soon.
    November 18th, 2008 at 11:14pm