What Happens Under The Sun - Comments

  • Hannahdoll

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    haha.
    Tom is such a manwhore.
    :]
    October 3rd, 2008 at 02:46am
  • whoeversheis;

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    Oh god! I love all of your stories!! Keep going!
    October 3rd, 2008 at 02:45am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    Good fucking job Gid!! Clap Keep up the good work my friend
    October 3rd, 2008 at 02:39am
  • oxkayxoteeox

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    add more add more add more!

    i love this :)
    October 3rd, 2008 at 02:23am
  • JessaKay

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    OMG Shelby i love it!!
    Hmmm...i wonder were you got the idea for her friend...? xD
    lol
    update soon, this is really amazing so far!!
    October 2nd, 2008 at 10:40pm
  • Lo_east

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    OH EMMM GEEEE. update betch. lol.
    October 2nd, 2008 at 10:08pm
  • faramir;

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    Great start love <3 It's brilliant.
    October 2nd, 2008 at 09:20pm
  • Velvet Shadow

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    DUN DUN DUNNN!!! I love this new story!! and that says alot cause I dont read very many Tom stories but I loveeeeee this one!! So update soon!!!!
    October 2nd, 2008 at 06:32am
  • Siro.

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    i like this story.
    The resort reminds of this place i went to in Cuba.
    Very Beautiful.

    more soon?
    October 2nd, 2008 at 04:38am
  • SweetSurrender

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    Eye-sex.

    we all know he wants to fuck her.

    great chapt. cnt wait 4 more.

    update soon bitte???
    October 2nd, 2008 at 04:18am
  • unhearted

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    eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! lol....i like it!....pretty please with sugar on top MORE!!!
    October 2nd, 2008 at 03:59am
  • Hannahdoll

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    Love it.
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    October 2nd, 2008 at 03:42am
  • oxkayxoteeox

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    ahhh im excited now!

    tom is my favoritee<3

    i cant wait for more!! LITERALLY :P

    your writing is incrediblexo
    October 2nd, 2008 at 03:19am
  • EliseObscure

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    Dude, I loved the first chapter. You are an amazing writer. I'm reading Until You Believe it also. I read Until You Feel It and I loved it. Can't wait for an update. =)
    October 2nd, 2008 at 03:10am
  • SweetSurrender

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    more more more more more more more more more more more more more!!!!!!!

    bitte???
    btw, i likes the layout. :]
    October 2nd, 2008 at 02:51am