What Happens Under The Sun - Comments

I just finished this story and it was mazing!! the characters were all believeable and it was nice how the relationship progressed slowly (well them falling in love)...

Haha..

What? Who's here? Where are my pants?

on chap 51, i hate derek to death.

So I just finished this story, and I just have to tell you,
It was absolutely amazing.
Definitely a fan, now. :)

wow that was really good

Like I said in my other comments fantastc writing, I loved it.

Ok, ok... I knoiw it must seem like it took millenniums for me to read this... even to me... :lol:

BUT! I was totally obsessed... then I had to stop cuz i had no time... and then I was stop myself from going to read it cuz i knew I didn't have much time, and I would end up reading it until 6am. Anyway... I'VE FINISHED IT!!!!!!! Yay!!!

Well... I OVED IT TO BITZZZZZ... A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!!!! I love your writing, and the story wasn't so lovey-dovey it made u either throw up or go to sleep. it was just right, and I loved the ending. Really, REALLY good.

I liked how they met... heh... classic Tom. Perfect!

oooooommmmmmttttttttt THE best story I have read in a lonnnnnggg time!

LAWL AT HER WITH BILL. WOW. i'm not surprised that it was a setup though. but the bill thing threw me off. in a roflcoptor sort of way.

and the end...sappy, but AMAZING. and the sexual first thoughts were just priceless. :D

chapter 74: OKAY, THANK YOU, FINALLY.

continuing.

as far as the chapters that they left the island until 66 go: DOES SHE NOT REALIZE THAT SHE IS BECOMING EXACTLY WHAT SHE WAS ON THAT VACATION TO ESCAPE? JEEZ, SOMETIMES SHE CAN BE SUCH A BITCH. AND YOU'D THINK JESSICA WOULD HAVE SAID SOMETHING, BECAUSE THAT'S HOW BEST FRIENDS ROLL, THEY TELL EACH OTHER THE TRUTH WHEN ONE REALLY NEEDS TO HEAR IT. end rant.

in any event, your smut is hot, your writing is REALLY good, and i need to finish reading, but i felt that it needed to be said. not many stories can create that sort of reaction within me. be proud of yourself.

WOW!!! I can't believe that they story is over! It was a GREAT story by the way! Sorry it took me forever to comment after the last time I commented! I was on break and no where near a computer with internet. I'm off to read another one of your stories!!

I really enjoyed the story, you're a great writer
Now I'm off to start reading A Difficult Equation ;)

I really enjoyed the story, you're a great writer :)
Now I'm off to start reading A Difficult Equation ;)

this story is AMAZING!!!! =]
very very good! ur such a good writer too =]
to bad its over lol... i enjoyed reading it

='( it's over!...I loved you story and enjoy every minute of it...thanks for being such wonderful writer ^^

GOD WJAT HAPPEN TO PUSHING THEM ALL OFF THE DAMN CLIFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WAS REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO THAT!!!!!!

woohoo proberly the best story i've ever read!!!
you are so awsome!

:) Wow........ what a perfect way to end the chappy....

*tear* :cry: this is making me cry....i dont wnat this story to end....*sniffle* ive just go to say youre an amazing writer and i cant wait to see how A Difficult Equation will turn out if this story was as good as it was ;)