The Weak Never Survive - Comments

Wait, hold on while I take a breather.
O.o
I’m not quite sure why, but this oneshot sincerely hit me hard. It was so…powerful, in its own way. I really loved how you started out with the killing of the crow in the beginning, and how it went throughout the entire thing. I also really liked how the bullet shot symbolized the one thing Xavier feared. Xavier is also a very kick ass name, let me add. I will say that the time skips were a bit confusing, and I had to read over a bit to make sure I was where I thought I was. xD The ending was so good! I was expecting him to kill his father and get it over with but nooooo you had to kill Xavier instead. Gah. Just gah. I loved this.

<3 Haven.

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Aw thats sad. But a very cute plot, also good meaning. Your details were good, they had us imagining it.

One Shot For One Shot

That was good. A bit confusing when it fast-forwarded in time and there was a few typos, but it was good. The father was kind of...I don't know...I didn't like him though. Just, his lessons, and the fact that he had killed one of his sons, and now he's just killed another.

Anyways, nice job. :]

I agree with the comment above me.
This was, wow. Good jog. (:

Whoa dude.

Great, but whoa.