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  • pezzie

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    Dude, that was creepy.
    And I'm all by myself *shifty eyes*
    Good story though
    June 12th, 2009 at 07:37am
  • x33ieroNINJA!

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    i liked it (:
    i srzly nearly peed myself -_-
    you said it was for an urban legend story contest,
    just wondering what urban legend its based off.
    April 23rd, 2009 at 04:33pm
  • Smashed Pumpkin.

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    Wow, that sent some intense shudders up my spine! I could never write a horror based story, I'd seriously suck. This was amazing though congratulations on coming 2nd place!

    - I liked the background image too by the way, it was perfect :XD
    February 6th, 2009 at 03:01pm
  • SpellsUnderTheStars

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    THAT WAS AWESOM!
    I bow down to you! I thought it was crepy as but I chose to read it while home alone at night in bed with no lights on.....I am a stupid dumbass!
    That scared me so bad! You deserve to win so bad and oh my gosh poor little mikey.
    And whoever it was up there^
    That said it didn't creep her out is a freak of nature cuz it was creepy as!
    BTW I'm reading all of your stories on my phone, your such a good writer.
    November 25th, 2008 at 01:00pm
  • ELEMENTAIRE;

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    this is fucking creepy.
    well done!
    November 13th, 2008 at 04:45pm
  • WolfEyes

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    I thought it was good
    but no offence it didnt freak me out
    sorry;
    good structure though
    luvs ya
    November 7th, 2008 at 10:00am
  • x's and o's

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    this was very goooood! it gave me the chillsss! =)
    October 30th, 2008 at 10:15pm
  • scottishcassie.

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    Holy shit! This is so good, I love the way you structured it, oh, so scary. You have definitely set a huge standard for the Urban Legends contest, much better than my entry. This creeped me seriously, wow. <3
    October 28th, 2008 at 09:32pm
  • Palahniuk

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    woah O.O
    im kinda glad i read this during the day, and with my parents home.
    if i had read it last night... when i was alone... id have hidden under the covers in my bed.
    this was amazing. you are made of win =]
    October 26th, 2008 at 04:29pm
  • pierrot the clown.

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    Shit. This fucking creeped me out. It's very well written, and I specially liked how you ended it. It was awesome... and terrifying, but that was the point.
    xx
    October 26th, 2008 at 02:50pm
  • bombcel

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    Oh my. . this was scary. . It creeps me out.. very well written. .This scared me much that i had leave a light in the broad daylight. .
    October 26th, 2008 at 04:21am
  • Alice Verney

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    holy crap i nearly pissed myself
    October 26th, 2008 at 04:16am
  • kryptonite.

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    I read this all alone in this room...
    I am freaked out now, I am almost crying because I'm so scared.
    That Kat, was awesome
    You shall win.
    October 26th, 2008 at 03:50am
  • Miss Chaos.

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    I was already really scared before I read this and I told myself not too but it was too good to pass up.

    Poor Mikey, and Gerard, and Frank, and Donna.

    I wonder who the killer was..

    This was really good though. [:
    October 26th, 2008 at 03:47am