Wow, that sent some intense shudders up my spine! I could never write a horror based story, I'd seriously suck. This was amazing though congratulations on coming 2nd place!
- I liked the background image too by the way, it was perfect :XD
THAT WAS AWESOM! I bow down to you! I thought it was crepy as but I chose to read it while home alone at night in bed with no lights on.....I am a stupid dumbass! That scared me so bad! You deserve to win so bad and oh my gosh poor little mikey. And whoever it was up there^ That said it didn't creep her out is a freak of nature cuz it was creepy as! BTW I'm reading all of your stories on my phone, your such a good writer.
Holy shit! This is so good, I love the way you structured it, oh, so scary. You have definitely set a huge standard for the Urban Legends contest, much better than my entry. This creeped me seriously, wow. <3
woah O.O im kinda glad i read this during the day, and with my parents home. if i had read it last night... when i was alone... id have hidden under the covers in my bed. this was amazing. you are made of win =]
Shit. This fucking creeped me out. It's very well written, and I specially liked how you ended it. It was awesome... and terrifying, but that was the point. xx
And I'm all by myself *shifty eyes*
Good story though