Rumored Nights - Comments

I can honestly say I semi-ly expected that. I'd love to see how this will affect William and Alice's relationship. Poor Carloline. The feeling of weakness she has to have. But you gotta love the fact that she stayed strong for her sis.

I definitely got that disgusting vibe from Luke before, but I was HOPING that it wasn't true...but after Caroline left I was like 'oh damn, I bet it is' and then when he was in her room i was like HOLY SHIT NO WILIAM SAVE HER!! haha.
And he did, so I love you.
This was phenomenal, and I'm soooo happy you updated again. Plus, now her trust and love for William is even more restored, everything can be happy and wonderful, wooooooooohhhh.
Update again!

I thought that Luke might have done something to Caroline, but I was so hoping I was wrong.
You wrote that amazingly well. I can tell that you put so much into that - it really shows. It's really powerful.
Thank god Bill was there - I'm not sure if Alice could have stopped him.
More soon?

I thought that the was coming.
Holy crap, though.

wow, this new chapter, not what i was expecting at all, but it was really good. you can see the full progession of Alice's character even if it was brought out in a terible way. I like the way you wrote it, not going into too much detail but just enough to get your point across. I'm going to be said when this is over :(

gasp, oh the drama!!
it's good :)
more soon? x.

I saw it coming. but i was kinda hoping i was wrong.

Hmm... it was a little obvious to me, but there was still that little 'Kara, you don't know what the hell you're talking about' voice saying I was wrong.

And I liked it. -nods-

I thought that might happen but didn't think it actually would!!!
Chapter was so well written though =]
At least William was there!

i figured that was what was happening to caroline before =[ poor girly..

but also very glad that william was in the closet.. ALRIGHT! haha

PS: AMAZINGLY WELL WRITTEN :D

I DID NOT see that coming!
I cannot believe that sick SOB!
William was all amazing and protective <3
Poor Caroline

What a dick! What a disusting, perverted, pedo bastard! Will should have totally beaten the living shit out of him!
Poor Caroline and Alice! Please tell me that he gets thrown in jail!
And I kinda thought that would happen when he came into her room, I dunno. I never really liked him...

More! More! More!

Please? *puppy dog eyes*

OMG.
Update this soon girl.
I'm so nervous for this next one.

I hope he doesn't rape her 0.0, that would be awful!

I'm sooooo happy that you updated this!! =] And I loved it, as always!

Was that story idea the one you told me about ages ago? Or is it a new one...? Post a link once it's up, will you? xD

Uh-oh.
This..can't be good.
<3

I absolutely loved it!! I can't believe that this story is almost finished. It's good that your trying something new. I'm actually eager as to what you your Brendon and Ryan thing'll work out. :)

! Okay, I've officially seen too many movies. -shakes head- There's no way that's going to happen.

And yay! I wanna read Bden/RyRo/OFC story! X]

She's still not told him how she feels =(
I hope Luke just leaves them to it =/
Update soon