i really liked ur story. i just finished it today!!!! love it! i think u should write a sequal about it and have her run into Jerzy again. yeah!!!! that'd be kool!
Bahahaha!!! The part about the teachers, lol that's like the only part I read, but aaahhhahahaha roflmao that was so amazing! I love your writing style, dude it's so descriptive and. . . like you're actually talking. It's good, I like it a lot. ^_^ I'll be sure to read more of your stuff.
good story, good story! one thing- you shouldn't mention our teachers, hun. Bad idea. What if her kids have one of these? Well, no, just it's kinda weird, like on the author's comments don't put their real names!!!!!!!!!!!