Lost In Lysergic Bliss - Comments

wow nice one shot

heehee. it was confusing in the begining but then it was awesome.:]

Good writing style here.
All in all, an excellent one shot.
We all like our Freard.
And you did a nice job of supplying it :]

how fucking sweet did a great job one shotz usually suck (not like that) but i liked this one a lot
nei

that was pretty hot... a little cliche, but hot, I liked it ;D

OMFG it's awesome!!! i really like your style. sounds very good :)

it turns me really on ;)

i read this a while ago but i forgot to comment....so i read it again, and.......wow!!!
u pwn me!

oohhh... that was an amazing one shot... i love that you don't give away wo the POV belongs too from the start... well you sorta... anyways i liked it a lot...
you should write more one shots... i'll definetelly read your story!

It's really good, I love how it's in 2nd person...

totally sexy!

Hawt and sweet.
Just how I like 'em. ;)

well written! Would be good with more chapters but that's just because i'm greedy :D

That was amazing! Perfect frerard, I think I need a could shower *fans self*

Great job, keep it up! (no pun intended)

*claps* very well written. i look forward to other stories written by you.

That wasn't bad at all. Everyone needs to write a Frerard. It was very good for a first one-shot.
xoxo

Not bad, kid. You've got some promise in this field. It's a tad cliche, but hell, every fangirl needs to get that first Frerard out of their system.

thanks :)

wow thats aweome
it wud rock as a chaptered fic
but it makes a kwl one-shot too
:mrgreen: