Just read the latest chapter. AMAZING!!! Very interesting, unique. And you were worried about not having a plot? Now I'm fretting that everything I write will pale in comparison to yours. :P
Wow. I absolutely loved the new chapter!!! I REALLY LOVE where your story is going! I think, once you finish writing it, you should shoot for publishing, honestly Amanda, I want this book bound with cover art and everything so I can buy it and read it the way books are meant to be read! DO IT! Ahem, anyways, I'm really looking forward to your next chapter! Message me when you get back from Italy and message me as soon as you are ready to update, or, of course, you need a sounding board for ideas you're tossing around. *PS, I nearly cried over Trevor, AGAIN!!!
With the most amiable and admiring adoration of your talented writing, ~Michelle.
OMG AMANDA I LOVE IT!!!!! It didn't seem fake either, it's fantastic!!! I'm not sure if I should be sad or happy that he is dead xP I wanted him to die its just one of those things where you don't know weather its a good thing or a bad thing if that makes any sense. WRITE ON AMANDA!!! (xP Lol had to add it) Cant wait for the next chap! ---- Karlene
That was an amazing chapter, beautifully written. BUT YOU KILLED TREVOR. I knew it was gonna happen but, so painfully....YOU MADE ME CRY AMANDA!!! YOU'RE GONNA PAY! oh, I know, Corliss WILL DIE! XD I'm kidding. I love you. Update soon.
OMG it was so SAD, but I loved it!!!!!! I feel bad for Trevor but... xD and why is it that uncle LUKE sounds familiar, is that the Luke from the beginging of the story? xD update soon!!!!! ---- Karlene
Amanda, lots more people have read the first chapter of Jinx and very few have read the most recent chapter. Anyway it was amazing and very cute. The little dreamcatcher at the end Poor Trevor *hugs* I love him even though I want him to die at the same time Its a little confusing xoxo Jenn
AMANDA YOU UPDATED IT!!! YOU DIDN'T EVEN TELL ME! Now that I have that out of my system it was great hugely great But hurry up and off him already the Alec can come in and sweep Eli off her feet And at some point you need to explain to me why their eyes are purple it not to all your readers anyway off to write more Jinx xoxo Jenn
yes, Yes, YES! I am really, really happy that you updated (even though I've already read part of it prior to when you updated, but that doesnt coun't XD) I am really happy that you updated it (uh a little repetive there [oops]) The chapter was AMAZING! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! KK cya at school!!! BbyeBbye ---- Karlene
@ Michelle: You can marry my writing style if you want... that can be arranged... *laughs so hard at theyself she falls off chair* And we'll see, I currently lack reason for the next chapter... need inspiration... *turns on radio to oldies station*
@Korky: You have Michelle to thank for the Grilled Cheese thing.
That was such a good chapter, they seem to just be getting better and better with each one. I am IN LOVE with your writing style. :) I love all the romantic stuff you wrote, it was giving me some major chills. The kiss scene was so flipping good! hehe, you quoted me :D Oh, I have a very strong theory on who, or "what" this "voice is". ;) Update soon, I KNOW you can!! Please do tonight If you can, I NEED to read the next chapter. ;) Catch you later and be sure to let me know when you add the next chapter. :) ~Michelle Erin. May Nocturnal Never Even Set His Eyes Upon You. Dang it! Thats already in my signature, isnt it? *Mumbles incoherently.* Gah!
Amanda it's amazing! I love it I like the ending it's perfect You had better write this one quicker otherwise I may have to hunt you down and I know where you are xoxo Jenn
haha. That was awesome Manda, you'd better update soon though, I want to know what Trev's surprise for Eli is. Haha, nice work at putting Jinx in, good promotional skills, though I hope this doesn't mean you somehow plan on putting drunken Corliss into Dream Catcher, I'd have to kick your @$$ :P Haha. Love the update, update again soon. ~Michelle.
I loves the conversation with the napkin :P But I would have kept the napkins, then again, I am a bit of a hoarder. Might have to do something about that. Anyways, great chapter! And Jinx was there! That was so fantastic :) I loved how you kept her personality, you didn't alter it to suit the story. And only Jinx would reward someone for believing in vampires with a pen. I have to start commenting on every chapter like karlene :) SWEET CHAPTER AWESOME CHARACTERS & EPIC STORY!!
(This may be my longest comment ever O.o) Oh and update nerd-tastic adventures please!!! p.s. conversation was a little long for 2 napkins
OMG WOW! AWESOME CHAPTER AMANDA! Aha, you put Jinx in here YAY!...I am so glad it was Alec at the table and not Nightmare XD. Wonder what Trevor's (not sure if i spelt that write XD) surprise is? XD Can't wait for the next chap, update soon please.