Endless Love - Comments

Wow, loved it, that was really good, looking forward to more updates, I want to see what is going to happen and I love all the description and detail.. xD

I like the start of it yes the spelling can trick me but i just re-read it and i get it. Not trying to critisize i;m just saying your spelling could use some work other wise keep it up.

Wow, I quite like this story. =]

Although, there were several spelling and grammer mistakes, and you should always start a new paragraph for each characters' dialogue, but other than that it's an interesting story. ^-^

Well done!

I'll be looking forward to read the next update.

aww thanx for dedicating chapter 2 to me *blushes* that was nice :) this story is getting more intense. the discription of the vamp boy was awsome with so many details i could really see him. and then when she climbed on his back and they went running through the forest that was cool. u can tell their going to be friends. i really like the story, hope you keep writing!

i really like this! its a refreshing break from the- vampire immediately gets obsessed with girl, girl falls helplessly behind. i luv it! keep da chapters comin

I like how you show the feelings of the caracter, and the dad is nice i think. Also i think the girl is getting obsessed with the vamp boy and maybe shes gonna start to like him, but then what if the vamp boy killed her mother... ?! the plot is getting good keep it going :)

ooo first comment yay! thanks! love you haaa

ooo first comment yay! thanks! love you haaa

this is a really cool story. its exiting in the first part and then the girl with her dad, that has funny details. And it has suspence, i want to know what happens. r u gonna update this one?