Wow, I really like this. I love that you made it LeATHERMOUTH incorporated. Because they're simply amazing. And I also like that you changed the ages and made Gerard the idolizer for once.
It's very good, keep writing.
And it's good to hear that you're grandmother is well.
Absolutley brilliant, You MUST keep writing this... This story has major emotion through it , feelings, it's unlike what youve written before because it has much more depth