October 11th, 2008 at 08:54am
Converting you to my fandom was the best thing I ever did :file:
Don’t leave me!
This was SPECTULAR
Let me just say you have a niche for laid-back, humoristic characters. My advice? STICK WITH THAT. Not saying you suck at the dark stuff, but you have mad talent in this genre and you should embrace it!
Your characterization of the boys is SPOT ON. Ryan, the quiet but ‘don’t fuck with me’. Brendon, the horny slutty boy who is really too comfortable with everyone. Spencer, the good loyal friend who doesn’t want the drama llama, and Jon motherfucking Walker, the coolest cat of the bunch.
I love the Jon/Brendon aspect of this. I love how Jon can see right through Brendon’s charade. Fuck Heather, this is so damn good. I am HOOKED. There is only two parts?
I demand more.
This fandom needs more work like this.
:D
P.s. Moar slutty Brendon, more slut! Brendon. I occur.
This is pure brilliant:
"No, I'm the new and Pete's the old," Brendon declared, certain. "Like Star Wars, dude. The old always dies off, and the new arises."
"So you're comparing a love triangle to Star Wars?" Jon choked, surprised. "You are such a nerd."
"Ahem," Brendon smirked, running a hand through his hair, sliding the too-big sunglasses onto his face. He never looked better.
And you can't stand it.
"A very hot nerd, thank you very fucking much."
I love how you twisted the lyrics to fit that scene. It FIT so awesomely well.
…Oh and in case you didn’t catch on:
I loved this.
Oh...can I beta the next part? -puppy eyes-
:cheese:
Yes