If You Knew...Would You Save Me? - Comments

First off I'm a huge fan of Javey and I greatly appreciate this story.
Second, that was the most beautiful rape scene I've ever read.
I could really feel Davey's obsession with Jade.
And who could blame him?
Hahaha good job. :)

NOW I LIKE AFI.

Jade is so innocent looking. I want to corrupt him. Except for the fact that he's like twenty years older than me. He can corrupt me, I guess. ;)

Good story, but sad. =( *runs off to read Javeys on AFIslash*

Davey, you know.. if you get sick of fucking Jade.. There's always me (: AMAZING I HEART THIS, It's better then corndogs!

Mmmm.... nice.

Very good story. :D

I just want to commend you on the fantastic way you portrayed Davey's delusion. I am also happy that he sort of told us his reasoning for doing this and not stopping, it wasn't just secksecksecks

And I know this was for the story purposes only, but who listens to their own music while having sex?

Now I'm going to practice my betaing skills:
"I unzipped his tight pants and pealed them off of him. Then I pulled off his boxers as well, and touched him like so many times before."
It should be peeled.

But it was still a marvelously fantastically crazy story. I liked it very much =]

PWN!
I's calling it Smith.
Because he rules.

Anyways, I totally love this, like I've been saying through aim to you.

I should write a Nilvey, just like uber quick. :mrgreen:

I wish to see more Javey from you, woman

And Logan?
I'm still better at writing boysex :lmfao