Bar Fights and Broken Hearts - Comments

Songz (100)

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This is amazingly well written, I found one or two faults, but they didn't take away anything. The description of emotions was awesome, it really allowed me to understand and feel the way they are feeling.

I'm not a big fan of fan-fic but this shakes my believes a little bit.
good job kiddo.

June 27th, 2011 at 05:45pm

catch 22 (100)

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Very interesting! I liked the drama, but there was comedy too.
Really nice :)

May 27th, 2009 at 08:45pm

Julie Black (650)

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omgosh this was great!!
I love the way you wrote it and how perfectly you captured all of their personalities.

May 26th, 2009 at 08:48pm

dirtylittlerocker29 (100)

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it was good. better than i could have done. i CANNOT write one shots. i liked it.

Can't wait to see what u think of my stories.

This was great. thnx.

October 27th, 2008 at 07:57am

cloudchords. (100)

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I loved this so much.
Your writing style is amazing.
I'm going to read the other story you have in a bit.
<3

October 23rd, 2008 at 02:30am

Straight-outta-Dodge (100)

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I really can't believe that no body has commented on this and you are right, this is really good. I can't wait to read your other material

October 19th, 2008 at 04:14pm