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  • Catastr0ph3

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    EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL CLIFFHANGERS!
    Grrrrrrrr!

    Other than that you are right they do make me addicted!
    I can't wait for the nest one!!!!!!
    October 18th, 2008 at 12:23am
  • Aightball

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    Cliffhangers are evil! *laughs*

    That was great! You are very good at descriptions and it really gives me a good picture of where he must be. I can't wait to see what's behind that door!!
    October 17th, 2008 at 04:40pm
  • Aightball

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    I like the layout!

    Great update =). I love the way the emotions come across and I'm very excited for more!
    October 17th, 2008 at 04:56am
  • Catastr0ph3

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    Cool!
    I hate deja vu!!

    I think the layout thing is pretty kickass keep it!
    October 17th, 2008 at 01:46am
  • Catastr0ph3

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    Yes!!
    The sequal!
    I can't wait!!
    October 16th, 2008 at 12:13am
  • xxxJimmysullivanxx

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    Yay! Did he see her in the mirror?? OMG I can't wait!
    October 15th, 2008 at 09:20pm
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    Yay for sequels!! =)

    Great start and already you have me on the edge of my seat wondering if Jimmy is being kidnapped or something!
    October 15th, 2008 at 05:00pm
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