So Beautifully Dark - Comments

ah im a new reader to this story, and i know its done and all and theres a sequel but i gotta say in chapter twenty when raiden says 'silly dog, i do what i want' it reminds me of 'silly rabit tricks are for kids.'
yeah i know waaaay off topic, but i had to say thatt.
haha.
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Hm, so what Rory's new powers are showing themselves?
So, was chapter 23 the final chapter?
Great story and I can't wait to read the sequel!

Eep.
I wrote it late last night <3
XD

OOOO work out....it should be fun..lol
Can't wait for the next chapter.
I really hope she finds out where Ronnie went.

hmm wonder what they're gonna go do?!?!? oo and isnt it an aura not an aurora?

OMG WHERE IS RONNIE?!?!?!

-hyperventilates-

YOU DIDN'T WARN ME HE WAS LEAVINGGGGGGGGGGGG!

And yes. There should totally be a squeal. /shifty

ily dahling. <3

oh my god i loved it!!!!!!!
;))
haha

I love this story, I just found it and now I'm sad that its gonna end soon. :(
Umm, definately a sequel!
And more chapters!
Asap!
:D

nooooo. he left!

NOOO...Ronnie left. I love this story so much. Can't wait for more

There definitely needs to be a sequel. This story is great!

your story is bitchin' yay for a sequel!

wonderful!! soo are wil and brian really at peace with eachother? as for a sequel, i guess it depends how you end this story...

Well, finally a truce.
I wonder how Rory felt after Ronnie up and left without saying good-bye.
I mean I'd feel kinda sad.
I really liked your choice of description when Rory drank the cup of blood.
How it tastes of honey and not all coppery.
I never read that in any of the other vampire stories I frequently read.
Very awesome.
Thanks for updating :)

Wow. I want Rory to go with Brian. I have nothing against Wil but I like Brian more. lol. Great update.

Yes! Woot!
Raiden and Sebastian have now paid the piper!
I wonder how Wil and Synyster will work out a truce?
I hope Rory isn't being presented as a truce trophy or something like that.
Thanks for updating!

That was a very gross, yet good, update. xD I think I winced the entire time I was reading it. I'm glad the asshole is dead though. WOOT.

yes they are all ok!!! wonder whats gonna happen now between syn and wil?!?!

yes they are all ok!!! wonder whats gonna happen now between syn and wil?!?!

o.O;;

I agree. Rip out Raiden's throat. What an asshole. I can't believe him. Ugh. LAME.

However, I have finally caught up, and I love the updates. Though. I'm surprised that Wil actually changed her. Very. I didn't think he had it in him. o.O;;