I just read the prequel and loved it! It drag on for too long, like most A7X kidnap fan fics do which was pretty good. You got straight to the point and didn't waste any time with fillers, I also liked how you didn't have about fifty chapters full of torture. As soon as I finished reading the prequel I had to read the sequel, and I must say, it's amazing so far. It was a bit sad that the last two girls died but, that was very different from other plots and made the story a bit more interesting. So I'll quit my rambling now and say, well done! I have to read more of this soon so please update! xx :)
I have a strong dislike for the boys in this story = ( Except for Johnny...though he is a fool for getting caught up in it all in the first place!! FOOL I SAY!! Tee hee. Loved it ducky =D x
I know Zacky's an arsehole in this story...not quite the right word but I don't want to be too mean about him!! lol...but I don't really want him to die...can't he just be shipped off to me and I'll punish him?? ; ) Hee hee!! LOVED IT!!!!!! x