Text Me When You Get Back From Heaven. - Comments

First off, I love the layout. It's a paradox, sort of, how it's fancy-ish in the middle and cartoon-y everywhere else.

The line "future music leaders of our future" is a bit redundant.

For some reason, I really like the line We were waiting for Mr. Tore, aka my boss/producer, aka the infidel, and the big mojo whatshisface, aka the firer, aka the life ruiner.. I believe it's all the a.k.a.s. Kind of funny.

Also, I really like your vocabulary. It's very sophisticated.
Words like sardonic, abhorrent, pathetic....they just give me chills.

You seem to really follow the whole "stream of consciousness." You link things together the way you think. I like that.

I love the main girl.

so.
I've missed reading your things.
So I've made tonight the night to catch up on everything ^^

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I enjoy.
Always do. ^^
This character was always fun to read. ^^
...that line made more sense in my head. heh.

That's really good! I like your writing style. :D
--Caine