Hmmm...*suspicious eyes* maybe Frank's in the mob, and that's what's bothering him: he has a dealing he's trying to close back in New Jersey.
...oooor not. LOL. ;)
Mikey and Shelley seem to be getting along well. It's nice to see an MCR fic that doesn't completely focus on Gerard (hahaha, I'm such a hypocrite for saying that).
I am still very intrigued! Can't wait for chapter 5! :)
DOGPILE! XD Psht, PS2 is where it's at. None of this XBox nonsense. ;) Hmm...you know, I think "what crawled up Frank's ass and laid eggs" is a girl. Like, an ex-girlfriend. One he just broke up with, and that's why he's acting like a tempermental cat. Can't wait to find out! :)
This would be like a dream come true to go touring with your favorite band! The idea gives me jitters, lol! Hahaha, Shelley's board reminds me of when I was obsessed with Simple Plan and bought one of those teeny magazines just to get the back cover which had their picture on it. XD What is up with Frank? He's awfully moody, isn't he? ;)
Good GOD, $20 for teeny magazines??? Poor Julie. She really IS a good friend. XD I think this story has definite potential. I like Julie's nonchalant attitude toward pop culture and how her friend is polar opposite--that's a start to good character development. I think the only thing I could suggest would be a little more background on Julie and her friend. Maybe how much school/work they both missing? Or maybe Julie is agitated and tired because she goes to work/school and stays with her friend during the night. And why is she staying with her friend since her friend still has family around? I believe Julie mentions that they are barely out of their teens...you know, little details like that. It will definitely spice up a story and add more to your characters! :)
...oooor not. LOL. ;)
Mikey and Shelley seem to be getting along well. It's nice to see an MCR fic that doesn't completely focus on Gerard (hahaha, I'm such a hypocrite for saying that).
I am still very intrigued! Can't wait for chapter 5! :)