Oh my! Now I'm excited for the last chapter, I want to know who it is! I am in love with this story, thanks so much for that little dedication! More soon ok?:)
Hey love! I have to say that your story has started out rather great! The first bit was so sad, with Jeremy and what not, but still good! Might I suggest that for your future conversation parts, you put spaces between the lines? It makes it easier on the eyes. Ex: ''Hi there'' she said
''Hi there'' he said
Just a suggestion! Keep up the good work! I'm definetly subscribing!