Till The End Of Time - Comments

  • Princess Pernicious

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    I stumbled across your story and I really love it. Please update soon!
    March 10th, 2009 at 07:41pm
  • gidjet363

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    That was intense!
    That part with the kid at the end gave me a little bit of goosebumps :P
    I love it, update soon =]
    December 3rd, 2008 at 03:06am
  • gidjet363

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    Oh my! Now I'm excited for the last chapter, I want to know who it is!
    I am in love with this story, thanks so much for that little dedication!
    More soon ok?:)
    December 1st, 2008 at 10:19pm
  • gidjet363

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    Finally an update, but it was great! I love the way you write.
    I'm rather anxious to find out what happens next :)
    Keep it up!
    November 28th, 2008 at 02:59am
  • gidjet363

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    Hey love!
    I have to say that your story has started out rather great!
    The first bit was so sad, with Jeremy and what not, but still good!
    Might I suggest that for your future conversation parts, you put spaces between the lines? It makes it easier on the eyes.
    Ex:
    ''Hi there'' she said

    ''Hi there'' he said


    Just a suggestion! Keep up the good work! I'm definetly subscribing!
    October 20th, 2008 at 12:04am