Lost Without You - Comments

If you need help gettin your muse back try listening to so good music. That always helps me and my co-author. alot of our stories were written after some major insperation from music and comic books XD. I really like this story it would be a shame to let it die young.

lol, I LOVE DEATH NOTE! I'm gonna make one of these, but I'm going to re-write the series the way I wanted it! :D!!! check it out! it'll be called death note. extra characters=more mayhem!

be careful about what Point Of View you're in
you switch from Third to First person a few times
and it's kinda confusing
:) but good job XD

That was so sad, I hope they get to see eachother again! How could his father take him away from who he loves? :(
I hope it works out for em' ;)

I love it, it's so cute! Hehe... they work well together.. xD
Can't wait to see how the surprise party goes.. :D:D

Wow, I can't believe I haven't read this, it's really good, I'm deathnote obsessed! xD
And this is the best! xD

ok i thank you all for the comments...more please!
and i will update
i have 4 subscibers which is more tahn my sasori story yet i have more comments on it
GET COMMENTING ahah tell your friends (:

lol i didn't edit it soo yer thanks for telling me lol
ur the first one t c omment so thank yoooh! :D

<.< OKay so now its at the top? I have no clue just use the spell check XD

wow this is really good! but you may want to consider using the spell check? Its down at the very bottom of the page. Its dead useful XD I should know i use it way too much to be a senior in highschool lol but keep it up! *Subscribes*