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  • No Longer Here

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    You are a good writer! All Mcr guys have kids that are 11? Weird kk gots to go tell me when you got more! And make your chapters longer! ; )
    May 23rd, 2007 at 11:16pm
  • Little red rose

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    i agree with person above me use the words like too and to and stuff it makes more sense and that...
    anyway keep going...
    :D :D
    libby
    May 22nd, 2007 at 09:39pm
  • TheSickness

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    its good, but don't use 2 if you want to say too or to and don't use wut and stuff... but besides that, its great
    May 22nd, 2007 at 09:29pm
  • TheSickness

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    yeah, i agree, can you PM me when the next chapter is up?? my email is down *cries* but when i fix it i'll subscribe
    May 21st, 2007 at 10:15pm
  • Little red rose

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    like the extra details now i want the next bit...
    lol
    libby
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    please send me a comment .. profile when you up-daTE
    May 21st, 2007 at 09:58pm
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