The Iero Twins Story - Comments

You are a good writer! All Mcr guys have kids that are 11? Weird kk gots to go tell me when you got more! And make your chapters longer! ; )

May 23rd, 2007 at 11:16pm

i agree with person above me use the words like too and to and stuff it makes more sense and that...
anyway keep going...
:D :D
libby

May 22nd, 2007 at 09:39pm

its good, but don't use 2 if you want to say too or to and don't use wut and stuff... but besides that, its great

May 22nd, 2007 at 09:29pm

yeah, i agree, can you PM me when the next chapter is up?? my email is down *cries* but when i fix it i'll subscribe

May 21st, 2007 at 10:15pm

like the extra details now i want the next bit...
lol
libby
:D
please send me a comment .. profile when you up-daTE

May 21st, 2007 at 09:58pm