I agree with YouRockMyWorld, your writing could use a bit of emotion to it. However, you have a lot of potential. Hope this helps! [Oh, and btw, love the title!]
i liked it up to chapter 2 when i found out they had super powers. sorry but that kind of thing isn't for me and the main point of view sounded very indifferent and without emotion for anything. hope this helps your writing
[Oh, and btw, love the title!]