Smoke Detector - Comments

serenailith (200)

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I absolutely love this story. You should definitely keep it going (:

January 28th, 2010 at 09:55pm

missmayhem (100)

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i love it! Update soon please :)

July 3rd, 2009 at 01:58am

decadent (100)

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if you delete this, i'm going to be a very sad bunny:(

March 5th, 2009 at 07:04pm

woahwoahwoah (100)

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she is so demanding its funny

March 3rd, 2009 at 07:22am

lindsaylunacy (100)

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I still read this!! (L)
Glad you updated hun, it was lovely.
And Bar Tender Matt is a dick, lol.

February 7th, 2009 at 02:46am

Red Lyte (100)

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I like this story so far.
Can't wait till the next update

February 4th, 2009 at 07:50am

jizzcity (100)

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SOON! :D

January 30th, 2009 at 10:55pm

lindsaylunacy (100)

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No updates hun? =[

January 30th, 2009 at 10:23pm

sarcasmic.x (100)

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I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!!!
*SUBSCRIBES*
UPDATE SOON? :D

(I gotta stop writing with capslock!)

December 28th, 2008 at 12:36am

Crystalmatters (100)

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If I wishfully think for matt and her to have copious amounts of (bicep loving sex) will it happen?
It was gooodah but then again, Steph you are a literary stallion
xxxxxxxxxx

December 27th, 2008 at 11:56pm

D. Dixon (100)

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i loved it!
i think their fight is funny, lol!
more soon!

December 27th, 2008 at 05:31am

AlishaIeroVeex (100)

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:D
I really like this story
: D

December 27th, 2008 at 03:58am

were.all.thieves. (100)

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this is great, can't wait for more.

December 27th, 2008 at 03:18am

D. Dixon (100)

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oh, this is good too!
lol
loved it!
more soon!
^_^

December 11th, 2008 at 04:39am

lindsaylunacy (100)

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'Eat shit.'
Love, love, love it.
(L) You know I always do.

November 13th, 2008 at 02:53am

Crystalmatters (100)

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Ah matt such a typical guy!
Brian gets no booty mahaha!
I'd give him some.
You too if you're lucky ; ]
Man I liked this part, especially the way you managed to put eat shit in there twice!
xxx

November 3rd, 2008 at 02:25pm