Dream Of Demons While You Sleep - Comments

  • Danie_Christine.

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    So hey, I truly like your story, but when people get the wrong words it bothers me a bit.
    When you wrote "“The jury finds Jena Vivian Thorn guilty of child abuse; she is sentenced to 2 years jail and has to take a parenting course.” The judge boomed. “The court is commenced” " in Chapter 23,
    I just wanted to let you know that commenced means ' started". and adjourned means ended.

    Thanks! Sorry about, not being too nice about it... i kinda just realised how it sounded.... but you should know that you get 2 cookies, a muffin and some juice for how great your story is...( the average story only gets 1 cookie, by the way,)
    June 18th, 2010 at 09:44am
  • RunningRIOTx

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    AWWW, i love this story so much, it hurts to see it end :(
    but every good thing must come to an end.
    June 28th, 2009 at 04:16am
  • FanFicFanatic94

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    aww it cant be over!
    i loved this story i dont care if it had errors
    it was a kick ass story
    June 2nd, 2009 at 10:53pm
  • RunningRIOTx

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    I love this story so much. I ams o happy that Jenna was put behind bars. YEAH :-P
    i can't wait for the next part. :)
    April 23rd, 2009 at 10:00pm
  • iheartAlexGaskarth!!

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    its awesometastic!!! i looooooove it!! :)
    April 20th, 2009 at 05:57pm
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    Ooh yay i get a shoutout!!! haha... blonde? i have to try and imagine that...
    April 14th, 2009 at 11:26pm
  • Lurking_shadow

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    I am commenting. ^^ Well I loved the chapter. Damn you Jayson. By the way. I found it odd the way you spelled it.... maybe it was just me. Oh well. You've done a great job
    April 12th, 2009 at 01:37pm
  • FanFicFanatic94

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    nice court
    good thing u didnt let her go free
    although tht would have been hard to type and make an excuse for tho
    anyway great story still
    April 10th, 2009 at 09:07pm
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    I really like this... will you update soon?
    April 10th, 2009 at 06:47pm
  • foreverbooks

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    wow this is really good and it shows that this shit happens... you are really good writer
    April 9th, 2009 at 07:16am
  • FanFicFanatic94

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    nice update
    i feel so bad for her
    March 20th, 2009 at 12:31am
  • RunningRIOTx

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    shes going to court.
    brutal.
    if a guy called me emo i would have took that kid and do so much harm i wud have been sent to jail :D
    March 15th, 2009 at 08:09pm
  • FanFicFanatic94

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    oooo psycho moms court case
    scary
    March 13th, 2009 at 08:29pm
  • FanFicFanatic94

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    if only parents were tht cool
    i would be killed if i did tht
    March 8th, 2009 at 09:36pm
  • Samantha Star

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    hey cass what ever happened to me checking your stories? there are alot of mistakes in this last chapter. it sucks that you cant come over now. next time be more careful. anyways this chapter was good. Sam loves you
    March 8th, 2009 at 01:19pm
  • Lurking_shadow

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    Wow Anna's temper is quite short hehe cool. Reminds me of the time a kid cracked his head open and blamed it on me *Laughs to self thinking back to the day* Oh right, I'm still typing? I love the change of layout. Keep up the good work.
    March 8th, 2009 at 08:24am
  • VilliamLaura

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    I love this story and I don't even listen to The Academy Is. . . I guess I'll have to! Update soon.
    March 8th, 2009 at 04:45am
  • Samantha Star

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    The apparent ‘Emos’ or as I like to call them ‘The kids who have nothing better to do then sit around and mop and talk about how hard there life is’ well mines harder and you don’t see me moping around. The sad thing is I’d probably get along with all of them; well it isn’t that sad but anyway.

    one word: BITCH. well actully.. shannon
    March 3rd, 2009 at 10:12am
  • RunningRIOTx

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    awesome-ness :D
    March 2nd, 2009 at 06:38pm
  • Samantha Star

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    ahhhh! its michael and ew its jared. i dont want you to leave cassie. :'( you will be gone tomorrow
    January 23rd, 2009 at 02:11pm