So hey, I truly like your story, but when people get the wrong words it bothers me a bit. When you wrote "“The jury finds Jena Vivian Thorn guilty of child abuse; she is sentenced to 2 years jail and has to take a parenting course.” The judge boomed. “The court is commenced” " in Chapter 23, I just wanted to let you know that commenced means ' started". and adjourned means ended.
Thanks! Sorry about, not being too nice about it... i kinda just realised how it sounded.... but you should know that you get 2 cookies, a muffin and some juice for how great your story is...( the average story only gets 1 cookie, by the way,)
I am commenting. ^^ Well I loved the chapter. Damn you Jayson. By the way. I found it odd the way you spelled it.... maybe it was just me. Oh well. You've done a great job
hey cass what ever happened to me checking your stories? there are alot of mistakes in this last chapter. it sucks that you cant come over now. next time be more careful. anyways this chapter was good. Sam loves you
Wow Anna's temper is quite short hehe cool. Reminds me of the time a kid cracked his head open and blamed it on me *Laughs to self thinking back to the day* Oh right, I'm still typing? I love the change of layout. Keep up the good work.
The apparent ‘Emos’ or as I like to call them ‘The kids who have nothing better to do then sit around and mop and talk about how hard there life is’ well mines harder and you don’t see me moping around. The sad thing is I’d probably get along with all of them; well it isn’t that sad but anyway.
When you wrote "“The jury finds Jena Vivian Thorn guilty of child abuse; she is sentenced to 2 years jail and has to take a parenting course.” The judge boomed. “The court is commenced” " in Chapter 23,
I just wanted to let you know that commenced means ' started". and adjourned means ended.
Thanks! Sorry about, not being too nice about it... i kinda just realised how it sounded.... but you should know that you get 2 cookies, a muffin and some juice for how great your story is...( the average story only gets 1 cookie, by the way,)