November 9th, 2008 at 11:10pm
Wow.
I agree with scum; it left me speechless.
Compuhletely SPEECHLESS.
You're an amazing writer and I hope you never stop.
(Yes, I subscribed to this, just so I never lose it)
:)
The Cliff Edge - Comments
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November 5th, 2008 at 09:56pm
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-Speechless-October 28th, 2008 at 12:04am
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I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BRAVA!!!!!!
Peace, Love, and Chemicals!
xoxo
Sweeney WayOctober 23rd, 2008 at 07:40am -
Dude, how the hell is anyone supposed to offer constructive critism where it can't be offered? Basically, I found it a brilliant read in its shortness, and I don't believe that it could be improved in anyway. It was short, sweet and to the point. Not over killed with too much dialogue, and easy to understand. Nice job...true piece of genius...October 22nd, 2008 at 10:31am
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i like how it came together. Good job ? i guess thats what i should say, good job :DOctober 22nd, 2008 at 12:21am
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What Sam[Seance] said.
I'm not that into ghost stories, but, this is really good.October 21st, 2008 at 10:19pm -
I really liked it!
It was good to kinda see the two different sides....
Really well written!
You should be very proud! ^__^
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i'm usually not all that into ghost stories, but i like this.
i like it a lot.
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Woo, first comment!
I thought it was really good. You're much better at oneshots then I. Much much better. Good job. ^_^
xOctober 21st, 2008 at 09:36pm
That was amazing, Becca.
Absolutely mind-blowing.
Fuckin' loved it!
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