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  • Living Deadly

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    Awesome! I love it. More? Cry
    February 23rd, 2009 at 07:29pm
  • dreamanotherdream

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    Thanks Wishie, don't worry some questions will be answered soon.
    January 16th, 2009 at 09:07pm
  • xxWishie

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    So many clues.

    I want to know alot more about this underworld.
    January 14th, 2009 at 09:36pm
  • xxWishie

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    I
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    Mischal might have a darker side! Bad boy... -drools-
    Damn you. You're getting too good for cliffhangers. They're shouldn't extist. Let's destory them.

    I like the whole underworld idea aswell! I want to know moreeee.
    January 8th, 2009 at 03:37pm
  • dreamanotherdream

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    Thanks everyone :)

    I really appreciate all the comments and you for reading it.
    January 6th, 2009 at 09:26pm
  • xxWishie

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    Sounds like Holly's lost her voice because of the city!
    -Thinks of more things to say to make this into an essay-

    Well, it's officially two paragraphs now! But anyways, back to the story. It's taken a dark turn indeed. What's up with the dwarfs!? And the crash! And the attacker! Gosh, now that I'm typing, it seems like alot has happened whereas it's just starting to happen. I think this is the most suspenseful cliff hanger so far you left us on.

    Great description about the city. I pictured that in my head crystal clear! Well, for me anyways.

    UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE.
    And let me proof read. Since I want to know before everyone else what happens! Since curiosity killed the cat ;]
    January 6th, 2009 at 09:26pm
  • xxWishie

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    Ooh Chapter 6.
    Love the chapter titles. That thing you do and Over now ;]

    I liked the knife introducted into it, well I know we seen it before, but we actually know something about it. =]
    I'll be waiting for the next update! =]
    December 16th, 2008 at 11:21pm
  • xxWishie

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    Like the update!
    Poor Holly =[
    She's better off without them!
    November 26th, 2008 at 04:19pm
  • NeverForgetTheWords

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    Wow! Loved it I really like Willow and Holly's relationship. And that action seen was extremely good. Love this fantasy story! Subscribing! :P And Fav Authoring For Sure!

    Loveeeee You
    November 2nd, 2008 at 08:32am
  • KiwiFreak

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    Loved it!! :D Love fantasy stories, and this ones interesting!!!!
    November 2nd, 2008 at 12:56am
  • xxWishie

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    Love the fight scene!
    I'm on Team Willow. =]

    And ofc. Holly.
    But still, Willow's cute. =]
    November 1st, 2008 at 07:16pm
  • NeverForgetTheWords

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    I cant wait for ythe next chapter this is excelent
    October 29th, 2008 at 11:31pm
  • xxWishie

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    Lovedddd itttt!!!
    I knew that was going happen ;]
    Because I have the word document! ;]

    I want to read moreeee!
    October 27th, 2008 at 09:23pm
  • BlueDreams

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    OMG

    I want to read that action scene :D
    October 27th, 2008 at 07:07pm
  • BlueDreams

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    Hi ^_^

    I liked it :D

    Willow seemed nice and his relationship with Holly seems great maybe a kind of brother hood :D
    October 22nd, 2008 at 09:02pm
  • xxWishie

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    I'm always 2nd comment =[

    I love this seris, I KNOW WHAT HAPPENS UP TO CHAPTER 3 YAY GO ME.
    Let me tell you, it owns ;].

    Willow's and Holly's friendship is so cute, and Willow ^-^. So adorable, hehe.
    October 21st, 2008 at 11:29pm
  • scream queen.

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    I

    Love

    It!!!

    In Love

    I love fantasy stories, especialy this one!

    More soon?!
    October 21st, 2008 at 10:55pm
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