I'm going through my subscribed stories currently, and unsubscribing to heaps. But I can't unsubscribe to ths story, it's so damn amazing. It's not cliche, it's not pathetic; its fantastic.
Call sentimental or whatever but I loved the ending. I don't think it would have felt right for her to end up with someone random. Zacky was always the one that was there for her, to share her pain. I imagine that they shared their love for him and it blossomed into something that didn't have anything to do with Brian and everything to do with each other. I like that idea. And I'd like to think that Brian would too. He wanted Zacky to watch over Mae and he wanted her to be happy. And a baby! A part of me wants to imagine they named it Brian.
Damn now I think I'm pmsing lol.
I loved this story. It quickly became one of my favorites and one of the few I actively kept up with. It drew me in, made me happy, made me sad. It did everything I want a story to do. You did a fantastic job.
I didn't cry during this chapter.... Who am I kidding!? I need to go redo my makeup.... Bloody hell. Serously, you're writing amazing chapters. I know what gonnaaaa happennnn, but I still wanna read it =P
Now I'm certain you're trying to turn me into a blubbering mess. The boyfriend had finally stopped laughing at me and then I read the update. You're an evil evil woman.
I can understand how she feels. When you loose someone you love that much, you just can't help but withdraw. Whether it's because you feel like you don't deserve love anymore because of something you did in that relationship or because it's keep to yourself than risk feeling that horrible pain again. I know she's trying to allow them in. I hope she's able to do it because dealing with the pain on your own just doesn't work. No matter how hard you try.
This story has to be one of my favorites I have ever read. You are a really good writer and had me in tears when Brian died. I cant wait till your next update...