OHMYGOD! THAT BITCH! I want to kill the Denim in the story. If she wasn't made up, I would kill her. -_- I get too emotional over this story.. x] But that's good.
omg i cannot believe Denim took the kids!!! AAH!!! i hope she doesnt hurt them or anything. it was cute at the end when Zacky was crying and Brian wrapped his arms around him and said he was sorry. I loved that. great update and I cant wait for more!!!
Please, bring them back!
Give them a happy ending, they deserve it, I know you probable already wrote the end but pleasee, they deserve it.